Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Wed, 07 May 2008 01:26:55 GMT

Thank you everyone for the kind words!
Right now, I'm working on putting Laura's solo stories up at my web site. Since they're real-life Micky stories, they can't be posted here so I'll give a shout-out when they're ready!
Sally, I think Laura's got another story coming soon and then I'll do mine. It's gonna...

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (All the names I tried were taken) — Fri, 02 May 2008 12:05:59 GMT

Nice one, ladies!

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (DavidForever) — Fri, 02 May 2008 08:12:02 GMT

I am waiting anxiously for your next story, Lisa and Laura.

Sally B.

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (LittleMetalBottletops) — Fri, 02 May 2008 07:03:56 GMT

Nicely done, ladies! For a while there I was wondering whether The Monkees were going to go against the "prime directive" (if you're a Star Trek fan you'll know what I mean ) and actually save Caesar. Of course that would have dramatically changed history forever and hurled them all into an alternate universe, so I'm pretty relieved that you didn't!

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 01:28:04 GMT

Thank you, Nora and Laura!
Laura, I got the first part of your story! I'll put up both versions on my website!

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (mickys411) — Wed, 23 Apr 2008 21:46:30 GMT

Awsome job Lisa

That was a very surprising ending
Great going

Mickys411 (Laura)

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (NoraLou) — Wed, 23 Apr 2008 09:52:06 GMT

Great job!

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Wed, 23 Apr 2008 01:44:59 GMT

Okay...here it is. The end. A big thanks to Laura and Sally for their help!

Peter began to cry as the Monkees walked over to Caesar's body. The Roman did not move or make a sound.
"Caesar, can you hear me?" Mike asked.
There was no answer. Mike pulled aside the toga covering Caesar's head, then quickly put it back in place. He looked at his friends and shook his head. Caesar was dead....

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 02:12:38 GMT

The next morning the skies had cleared and Caesar left his house with a few of his servants. He was on his way to the Forum, to handle the backlog of cases that had accumulated over the weeks he had been gone. Once that was done, he could make plans to take care of the Parthians.
When Caesar was a few blocks away, he was joined by another man going the same way.
"Greetings, Caesar." The man said.
"Hello, Casca." Caesar said, not breaking his stride,...

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Mon, 21 Apr 2008 02:14:11 GMT

You're welcome, dear! You deserve it!

Here's more...

Later that night, a line of thunderstorms passed over Rome, bringing with them heavy rains, wind and thunder. The Monkees were in their beds when Peter got up and screamed, "Ahhhh!"
The noise woke the other three Monkees up and they went over to Peter's bed.
"What's wrong, Peter?" Davy asked, "It's just...

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (mickys411) — Sat, 19 Apr 2008 22:16:45 GMT

Awsome Lisa

Can't wait to see the end
And thank you so much for the sweet e-card I got for my B-day

Mickys411 (Laura)

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Sat, 19 Apr 2008 02:18:13 GMT

Thank you, Nora!
Here's more...

After a short nap, the guys left their room and went over to what they thought was the main area of the house. When they got to the foyer, they saw a long line of men waiting to enter another room off to the side. The men were of all shapes and sizes, some carrying scrolls and boxes, others just simply waiting in line. Calpurnia walked over to them.
"Who are those...

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (NoraLou) — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 01:07:44 GMT

Great job as always! Yes, YUKU seems to be a little cukoo these days...(or nights, as the case may be).

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 00:54:00 GMT

Okay, here's more. I tried to post a few days ago, but Yuku has been...uncooperative at times.

Caesar led the way over to his house, located in a rich district of Rome. On the way there, Brutus told Caesar about the various things happening in the city. Antony said goodbye to Caesar and went off to his own house. Getting off his horse, Caesar knocked on the door and was admitted by a servant. The...

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Wed, 16 Apr 2008 02:11:57 GMT

"Wow, what a big place." Peter said in awe.
"The biggest and most powerful city on Earth." Antony said proudly.
Caesar just spared a glance at Rome, then gave orders for his troops to go back to their barracks. Roman soldiers were not allowed within the city walls. After a long time, Caesar led what was left of his command down to the city. Before entering the city however, he stopped at a villa not far from the walls. Caesar jumped from his horse and ran...

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Mon, 14 Apr 2008 01:58:23 GMT

Great Laura!
Thank you for all your help!
Also, thank you to everyone for their kind words!

And so...

Later that evening when camp was made, the guys walked over to Caesar's tent, but Marc Antony stopped them.
"Caesar is a busy man." Antony said with a...

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (mickys411) — Sun, 13 Apr 2008 22:03:49 GMT

Great going Lisa
And that's cool with me...

As the Monkees trodded away from the awful scene on their horse, niether one of them couldn't believe what they just saw.
"Was that just terrible what they did to those people?" said Peter.
"Well Peter, it's thier punishment for what they did," Mike answered.
"Couldn't they just say they're sorry?"
"That's not how they did things back then,"...

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (NoraLou) — Sun, 13 Apr 2008 00:16:39 GMT

You ladies always do an amazing job and I love the time travel stories as well! I was a history major but my emphasis was on American history and my knowledge of world history is sadly lacking. I always learn stuff from your time travel stories!

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (mickys411) — Sat, 12 Apr 2008 23:25:27 GMT

Very good Lisa
I'm having little trouble coming up with another part
Hopefully I'll have something tomorrow

Mickys411 (Laura)

Re: Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (dydrmblvr) — Fri, 11 Apr 2008 02:33:35 GMT

Very good job, ladies! Lisa, you've done a fine job with your research. I enjoy reading your time travel stories!

Hail, Monkees! (fanfic)

feeds@yuku.com (1bigbeatlesfan) — Mon, 31 Mar 2008 02:06:29 GMT

Hello, everyone! I'm back with a new fic for this month!
Once again, our heroes are taken back in time to...
Well, you'll see in a minute...
As always, Laura or whomever can help out

Fasten your safety belts, here we go...

The Monkeemobile raced its...