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Mickys411	who ya' gonna call? (fanfic)	Lead	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/02/05 6:04 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Ok, in this fanfic I combined my fave group and tv show(The Monkees) with my fave movie(Ghostbusters) and I got this..... "Who Ya' Gonna Call?" The Monkees were rehersing for an up-coming gig at the pad one spring day, when they heard a knock at the door. "Ok you guys, let me in or I'll break down the door!" shouted Mr.Babbit from the outside. "He sure has his way with words," said Mike. He placed his guitar down and went to answer the door. As soon as Mike opened it, Babbit stormed in yelling. "I am kicking you out!" "Sir, I thought we just paid the rent on the first of May," said Davy. "You did, but it was for March's payment," said Babbit. "Sir if you just give us more time," said Peter. "No more excuses. My lawyer's coming by with disposs papers, then out you go!" Babbit left leaving the Monkees standing quietly, the mood was somber. It was Micky who broke the silince. "Come on you guys. Babbit's just bluffing," he said. "Yeah, he's said it before and we still live here," said Peter. "You know, I think he really mean it this time," said Davy. "He did sound quite serious," said Mike. "I think I have a better chance of being crowned Ms.America, than having a lawyer stopping by the pad," said Micky. Just then, there was another knock at the door. "I'll get it," said Micky. He opened the door, and standing outside was a man around 40 wearing a suit and carrying a brief case. "Exuse me, My name is Alan Thomkins attorney at law," said the man. "There she is, Ms.America," Mike sang to Micky. Micky motioned his hand to cool it and spoke to the lawyer, "Did you say you're a lawyer?" "Yes, By the way do the Monkees live here?" asked Mr. Thomkins. "That will be us," said Micky. "Do you mind if I come in?" "Sure." Mr Thomkins entered the pad. "Is there anything we can do for you sir?" asked Mike. "Actually this concerns you," said Mr. Thomkins. He opened his case, while the Monkees sat around looking nervous. "Oh please let me explain while I'm here, said Mr.Thomkins, I'm a lawyer for thr late Dr.Steven Kenneth Issac Patrick Philp Yates the III, known to his friends and co-workers as Skippy. Mr.Yates has left the Monkees something in his will." "Excuse me Mr. Thomkins, I don't think we ever met Skippy, er Dr.Yates," said Mike. "But you did, awhile ago, you returned a wallet containing 400 dollars to Mr.Yates, he really appricated that. "It showed our honesty," said Peter. "No sir, it wasn't his wallet," said Mr.Thomkins. "Now what a minute Mr.Thomkins, said Mike, Why would a total stranger leave us something in his will?" asked Mike. "Yes, doesn't he have family?' asked Davy. "Dr.Yetes didn't have children, and was never married, however there is a nephew named Louis, but we were unable to contact him," said Mr.Thomkins. He then handed the Monkees a piece of paper. "I one Dr.Steven Kenneth Issac Patrick Philp Yates the III leave the Monkees 1512 Ninth St.," Mike read. "Did Dr.Yates named a street after us," asked Peter, sounding excited. "Not exactly," said Mr.Thomkins. He looked at his watch. "I better get going, please me meet at that address tommorrow morning at 10 am." "By the way, what was Dr.Yates a doctor in anyway?' asked Mike. "You'll find out tommorrow." The next day, The Monkees met Mr. Thomkins at 1512 Ninth St, at exactly 10am. "Well, gentlemen this is it," said Mr.Thomkins, indicating an old firehouse. The Monkees just stood there, in shock. Mickys411 Laura the glick groabnite
Larrysgirl	Re: who ya' gonna call? (fanfic)	#1	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/03/05 12:33 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great beginning, Laura! Let's see.... "We inheireted that?!" Micky whispered to the others. "Looks like it." Mike replied, shrugging his shoulders. To Mr. Thomkins he said, "Can we go inside?" "Sure, it's yours now." Mr. Thomkins said. The guys went inside the firehouse, followed by the lawyer. They found themselves inside an empty area which once held the firetrucks. "It's big." Peter said quietly, looking around. "It sure is..." Davy replied, then looked around. "Hey, where's Micky?" "WHEEE!" Micky yelled as he slid down the firepole and landed next to Davy. "This is better than the hurricane stairs back at the pad! I love this place already!" "At least we'll have room to park the Monkeemobile." Mike said, indicating the empty area. "And throw neat parties." Peter added. "C'mon upstairs, guys." Micky said, "There's lots of room for our stuff." The Monkees went up the stairs, followed by the lawyer, who was watching all this in quiet amusement. The upstairs held several more rooms, including places where the firemen used to sleep, plus a kitchen and recreation area. It was all a little dark and dusty, but nobody seemed to mind. The guys really liked the place. This came at a good time, since they were about to be evicted from the pad anyway. "Let's go see Mr. Thomkins." Mike said, "I'll guess we'll have to sign something to make this place ours." "Then we can move in." Micky said with a smile. Suddenly, out of nowhere, the fire alarm began to ring very loudly. Davy jumped into Mike's arms. The lawyer ran into the room. "What's going on?" He shouted over the alarm. "Why did you turn on the alarm?" Peter shouted back. "I didn't!" Mr. Thomkins shouted back, "I thought you four did." Then just as suddenly, the alarm went silent. Mike put Davy down. The Monkees and the lawyer just looked at each other in surprise. To Be Continued..... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Mickys411	who ya' gonna call? (fanfic)	#2	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/03/05 5:41 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Awsome job Lisa As we left off... Mr.Thomkins looked around the firehouse. "Is something wrong sir?" asked Davy. "Well, Mr. Thomkins said, "Remembered when you asked me yesterday on what kind of study Dr.Yates studied?" The four Monkees nodded their heads. "You see, Dr.Yates was a very well-known teacher at the local University, but he was a side-line paranormalist." "He was a lawyer like you Mr.Thomkins?" asked Peter. "A paranormalist, is a person who believes and studies ghosts, Mr.Thomkins corrected, he did that for many years, using the college lab for studies. One day, one of the other intructors tipped off the addmitartions about what Dr.Yates was doing, and they warned Yates that he keeps doing what he was doing, they'd fire him. Yates however decided to retired, became a paranormalist full-time, moved his work to this firehouse, after the new one opened about 5 years ago and spended the rest of his years here working on his studies. "That was such a sad story,"Peter sniffed. "Excuse me Mr.Thomkins, asked Mike, Not that it's any of our business, but why did Dr.Yates studied ghosts?" "I think it all happened when he was a kid, he was lost in some woods he lived in growing up, and he claimed that the sprit of his granfather led him home, said Mr.Thomkins, If you follow me to the basement, I'll show you where he did his work." The Monkees walked downstairs with Mr.Thomkins. When the reached the end of the stairs the guys saw all different objects around the basement. "Wow, check this out," said Micky, looking fasinated with the chemistry sets, books, and other scince-related objects, "This chem set is more advance than the one I got back at the pad." Just then, the guys noticed something on the wall. "Wow, check out the size of that oven," said Davy. "Yeah, inmagine how many pizzas you can cook in that oven," said Peter. "Actually, Mr.Thomkins said, that is where Dr.Yates placed his ghosts for studies." "You mean there's ghosts inside this place?" "I never really believed his line of work, but it is believed that his sprit may be here." What will happen next? Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
tysonwolf	Re: who ya' gonna call? (fanfic)	#3	[-]
Posts: 4909 (05/03/05 10:45 AM) Queen of the Clones CoCo Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Good story! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Instant Karma Mind Games All we are saying, is.... Give peace a chance It'll be, just like starting over Nobody told me Easy if you try
Larrysgirl	Re: who ya' gonna call? (fanfic)	#4	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/03/05 11:04 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Glad to be of help, Laura! Let's see now.... "His spirit may be here? Now?" Micky squeeked. This time Peter jumped into Mike's arms. "Don't be frightened, gentlemen." Mr. Thomkins replied with a slight laugh. "Dr. Yates was by all accounts a very nice personable man. So it stands to reason his spirit would be too. Like I said," Mr. Thomkins continued, "I don't believe in Dr. Yates' line of work, nor have I seen his spirit." The guys were slightly relieved to hear that. Mike put Peter down. The lawyer looked at his watch and pulled some papers out of his briefcase. "I have another client to meet. Here's the papers showing that the firehouse is yours. I wish you gentlemen the best." "Thanks a lot, Mr. Thomkins." Mike said, shaking his hand. The other Monkees shook the lawyer's hand too and the lawyer departed. The guys continued to look around in the basement. Micky went back to the elaborate chemisty set on the table against the wall. Peter continued to look at the 'oven' while Mike and Davy walked around. "You think there are spirits and ghosts here, Mike?" Davy asked. "No, I never did believe in ghosts." Mike replied, shaking his head. "It was nice of Dr. Yates to leave us this place, but I think he was a little loopy." Suddenly there was a loud growling sound in the room. Everyone froze in fear. "What...what was that?" Peter stammered. The growling sound was heard again. Micky looked sheepishly at the others. "That was my stomach, guys." He said, "Guess sounds are magnified in this room." "If Micky's hungry, I guess that means lunch." Mike said. Everyone went back upstairs, except for Peter, who was still looking at the 'oven' where Dr. Yates had kept his ghosts. "C'mon, Pete." Davy said, "It can keep until after lunch." Peter followed Davy upstairs. Since they hadn't moved in yet, the guys decided to grab a bite at a local burger joint, then go back to the pad for their things. Some time later, the guys came back to the firehouse. They had had lunch and now had the Monkeemobile packed with some of their gear. Peter and Micky opened up the large fire doors so Mike could drive inside. "Well, let's unpack." Mike told the others. They quickly began to carried the first load of boxes up the stairs and into the living quarters. To come down, they slid down the fire pole, which Micky loved. Grabbing more boxes, the guys slowly climbed the stairs and walked into the living quarters to deposit them. When they got into the room, however, they stopped in shock: All their belongings were out of their boxes and scattered throughout the room! Micky dropped his box and jumped into Mike's arms. "Maybe this place does have ghosts." Mike whispered to his shocked band mates. Oooohhh.... To Be Continued.... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Mickys411	Who ya' gonna call? (Fanfic)	#5	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/04/05 6:22 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Love it Lisa it it loovve it Let's see what I can come up with... The four Monkees just stood there in complete shock. "I thought you said you didn't believe in ghost," said Davy to Mike. "I don't," Mike answered. "Then why is our stuff scattred everywhere?" asked Micky. "Maybe we piled the boxes to high and everything fell over," said Peter. "That's just it, said Mike, Come on fellas, we gotta finish moving in." And so they did. The guys decided to forget about how the boxes were messed up. By the end of the day, everything was moved out of the Pad and either in the back of the Monkeemobile or at the firehouse. The Monkees said good-bye to their niehbors, who gave different reactions to the guys move. Mr.Babbit almost did a back filp, while Mrs.Purdy, who always thought of the Monkees as her 'sons' was a bit sad, but said she will come and visit. That night, when the guys were alseep, Micky got up to get a glass of water. And of course he took the firepole instead of the stairs. While Micky was getting a glass from the cuboard, he heard something. He looked around, but there was nobody. Just then, something flew into the room. It was green and looked like thing of jell-o, but it had a face. The green object moved towdars Micky, and he ducked. The green object then went through the wall. Micky placed his glass down and headed back up the stairs. But the green object popped out of the wall and flew right at Micky. Back upstairs, the other Monkees were asleep, when they heard a scream. They turned to see Micky's bed was empty. "Micky's in trouble!" said Davy. The guys jumped out of bed, and went to look for their friend. When they got downsatirs, they found Micky, hiding under a desk, and was covered in a green substance. "Micky, you ok?' Mike asked. "I think so," Micky answered. "What's that green stuff all over you?' asked Peter. "This green thing came out of no way, and chased me, I jumped under this desk, but that thing followed me," said Micky. Suddenly, the green object flew into the room. "Thats' the thing that slimed me!" Micky screamed. The green object stopped in front of the guys, smiled and said, "Hell-O." The Monkees screamed, and jumped under the desk. "Do you think he's gone?' Peter asked sounded scared. "I'll take a peak and check," said Mike. "Let's all check," said Davy. The guys poked their heads out from under the desk and sure enough, the green object was still there. "Hell-o," the green object again. While Mike, Davy, and Micky hid back under the desk, but Peter carefully came out from the desk and appoarched the green object. "Hi, I'm Peter," he said to the green object. "Slimer," said the green object pointing to himself. Peter turned to his friends and said,"You guys have nothing to worry about. He's friendly." The guys were a bit surprised, due to the fact that Peter was especially afraid of ghosts. They came out under the desk and introduced themselves. "I'm Mike," said Mike extending a hand. Slimer shook his hand and gave his name. "I'm Davy," said Davy sahking hands with Slimer. "Slimer," said Slimer, shaking hands with Davy. Micky was a bit nervous, but shook hands with Slimer. "I'm Micky," said Micky. But instead of shaking hands, Slimer gave Micky a kiss on the cheek. "You know Micky, I think he like you," said Davy. "Yeah I know," said Micky, wiping the slime off his face. "I think we should keep him," said Peter. "But Peter, he's a ghost," said Davy. "His name is Slimer, and you guys said if I make dinner once a week and clean my side of the room, I can have a pet." "Ok, but one the first day you don't feed it, back it goes," said Mike. "I wonder what that thing eats," said Davy. Slimer went to the fridge, went through it, came back out with a some the leftover pizza from that evening's supper and ate it in one bite. "Does that answer your question?' asked Micky. Looks like the guys have a new friend... Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
Larrysgirl	Re: Who ya' gonna call? (Fanfic)	#6	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/04/05 10:16 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Terrific, Laura! To Continue..... While Micky went into the bathroom to wash the slime off his body, Mike, Peter and Davy continued to talk to Slimer. "How long have you haunt...I mean lived here, Slimer?" Davy asked. "Long time." Slimer answered, bouncing up and down. "Been lonely, Skippy is gone." He said, looking sad. "Doctor Yates was your friend?" Mike asked. "Yes, he good friend of Slimer." The green ghost replied. Micky then walked back into the room. He had changed clothes and washed his face and hair. He gave Slimer an angry look. "Why did you attack me?" Micky asked. "Not attack, Micky." Slimer replied, floating over to him, "Wanted to say 'hello'." "Well, please don't do that again." Micky said. "Ok!" Slimer agreed...then planted another slimy kiss on Micky's face! The other three Monkees laughed at this. Peter looked at Slimer. "Do you only come out at night, or can you appear anytime?" He asked the green ghost. "I like night, but anytime ok." Slimer replied. The guys decided to go back to sleep and talk more with Slimer in the morning. "We're going to sleep, Slimer." Mike said, "Promise you won't make any noise?" "I promise!" Slimer said and went back to the fridge for something else to eat. "At least he's got a healthy appetite." Davy remarked. "Yeah, he's a growing ghost." Micky replied, still trying to wipe the green slime from his face. To Be Continued..... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
tysonwolf	Re: Who ya' gonna call? (Fanfic)	#7	[-]
Posts: 4909 (05/04/05 10:56 PM) Queen of the Clones CoCo Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I'm lovin' this story! Great job! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Instant Karma Mind Games All we are saying, is.... Give peace a chance It'll be, just like starting over Nobody told me Easy if you try
Mickys411	Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#8	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/05/05 6:01 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks Tyson Great Job Lisa The next morning, The Monkees were eating or rather attempting to eat the some-what over cooked pancakes Peter made. "How are the pancakes?"Peter asked. "Not bad, but are pancakes suppose to be crispy?" asked Mike. "Sorry, I think I had some egg shell in the batch," said Peter. "Mine are actually chewy." said Micky. "I can't even put my knife through mine," said Davy. Just then,Slimer appeared. "Morning," he said. "Morning Slimer," the guys said to their new friend. "Here Slimer, I made an extra plate for you," said Peter, handing Slimer some pancakes. "Peter,Slimer made be a ghost, but he may have taste buds," said Micky. Slimer ate the pancakes in one bite, burped, and licked the plate clean. "Yum, flappycakes," said Slimer. "Thanks Slimer, said Peter, At least somebody apperciates good pancakes. The guys fed Slimer the rest of their pancakes. Slimer thanked them and burped again. "Excuse me," said Slimer. After breakfast, the guys took Slimer downstairs to the basement. "Hey Slimer can I have a sample of your slime?' Micky asked Slimer, while setting up his chemistry set. Slimer sneezed, and got slime on the guys. "Bless me," said Slimer. Micky gave each on the guys plactic knives to scrape the slime off them. While Micky tested the slime,the guys talked to Slimer. "So Slimer, where exactly did you come from?" asked Mike. "Ghostworld, Slimer answered, Mean ghosties." "You man ther's more of you?' asked Davy. Slimer nodded his head. After awhile of testing, Micky got a result. "Ok, according to the tests, Slimer is indeed a ghost," said Micky. Later that evening, the guys were getting ready for a gig at the Palm Palace. "Can I come to?" asked Slimer. "Sorry Slimer, we wish we can, but you may spook the customers, said Peter, But don't worry, I'll sneak you some food from the kitchen." "Thanks Peter," said Slimer, sounding quite happy. The other guys said good-bye to Slimer, and took off to their gig. What will happen next? Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
Larrysgirl	Re: Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#9	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/06/05 1:06 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thank you, Laura! Thank you, Tyson! I just got a wicked idea... Slimer sadly watched as the Monkees drove away to their gig. Once again he was alone in the firehouse. As he wandered around, bored, he got an idea. Moving through the wall, Slimer caught up to the Monkeemobile and followed them over to the Palm Palace. The green ghost knew the guys told him to stay home, but he wanted to find out more about his new friends. When Mike parked the car behind the club, Slimer followed through the wall. To his delight, Slimer found himself in the kitchen and quickly helped himself to some hamburgers waiting to be served before the cooks saw him. "Yum. Good food. Me like this place." Slimer said, then burped. He disappeared as a cook came over. "Hey, what happened to those burgers?" A little while later, the MC came up on the stage. He was wearing a loud Hawaian shirt. "Aloha you guys and girls, and welcome to the Palm Palace!" He said happily. "Tonight we have a group that will rock your socks...here are the MONKEES!!" Upon hearing that name, Slimer moved through the walls and took a peek at the stage. He smiled as he saw his friends come up on stage and the people clapping for them. Slimer was going to clap too, but remembered he couldn't afford to be seen. Unless..... Since everybody was watching the Monkees perform, nobody noticed the short figure in the trenchcoat and hat gliding into the main part of the club. Being a lot shorter than the humans around him, Slimer had a rough time trying to watch his friends perform. "Excuse please, please excuse me." Slimer said as he tried to find a place to watch his friends. Finally, Slimer found a place to watch and he bounced back and forth to the music. His new friends played such good music! A few people found it odd for someone to be wearing a trenchcoat and hat in a place like this, but said nothing. A waitress came by with a tray of hamburgers for one of the tables. As she paused to let some people by, Slimer reached out his tongue and licked the burgers right off the tray! The waitress walked for several feet before realizing her meals were gone. Puzzled, she started to look on the floor for them. Finally, the Monkees were done with the first set and were set to take a break. "We'll be back in a little while!" Mike said. The crowd cheered and gave them a standing ovation. Slimer got caught up in the excitement and forgot he was supposed to be in diguise. "Monkees! Monkees!" He yelled to his friends. Slimer jumped up and waved to them. When he did that, his hat fell off and several people saw his green skin and un-human like features! "AHHHH! A GHOST!" A girl screamed. Several more girls, and some guys too, joined in the screaming and there was a stampede out the door. "What's going on?" The MC demanded, then saw Slimer floating in the middle of the floor and let out a scream himself. "HELP! GHOSTS!" He yelled and ran away himself. The Monkees saw all this and Micky ran over to the ghost. "Slimer, what are you doing? Get out of here! You're scaring everybody away!" He said angrily. "Wanted to see Monkees." Slimer replied looking downcast then quickly went through a wall. Later on, the owner of the now-empty Palm Palace gave the Monkees only half-pay since they only played half a show. When the Monkees came back to the firehouse, Slimer was nowhere to be found. To Be Continued...... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Mickys411	Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#10	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/06/05 5:48 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great job Lisa Let's see what I can do.... "Slimer! we're home!" said Peter. But Slimer was nowhere to be found. "Slimer!" called Davy. Slimer is didn't appear. The guys then beagn to check the firehouse. Mike checked the bedroom, no Slimer. Peter checked the kitchen, Slimer wasn't there. Micky checked the basement, but Slimer was no where to be found. Being the smallest, Davy looked through the vents, there was no Slimer. The Monkees met back at the main floor of the firehouse. "Did you find Slimer?" asked Peter to the guys. "No," said Mike. "I'd looked everywhere, but no Slimer," said Davy. "He not anywhere," said Micky. "I"m surprised that Slimer isn't around, he's mad at you for yelling at him," Peter said to Micky. "He caused us a gig." "But you didn't have to yell at him." "We told Slimer not to come with us, and he didn't listen." "That doesn't mean you can shout at him." Mike stopped the argument, when he spotted something on the pole. "Hey, I found something," he said. "What is it?" asked Davy. Mike was holding a note, covered with slime on it, and read the note. "Monkees, I know you don't what me around, so I'll go. Slimer." Meanwhile, Slimer wondered the streets, wearing the trenchcoat and hat. "Hey you," called a voice. Slimer turned around and said,"Who me?" "Yes you," said the voice, as a figure appoarched him. The figure turned out to be a middle aged man, with a mustache and glasses. "Who you?" asked Slimer. "I'm Dr.Louis Myers, I saw you at that gig tonight. "Yeah, Monkees yelled at me," said Slimer with a sigh. "You know, I have a place just for you. You see, I'm the long lost nephew of Dr.Yates," said Louis. "You knew doctor?" asked Slimer. "Yes, though we haven't spoke for years, I take up the same studies as him. Would you like to come with me? I'll give you a good home." "Yep yep yep," said Slimer. And Slimer did went home with Dr.Louis Myers. To be countinued... Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
tysonwolf	Re: Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#11	[-]
Posts: 4909 (05/06/05 12:09 PM) Queen of the Clones CoCo Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Awesome job, Lisa, Laura! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Instant Karma Mind Games All we are saying, is.... Give peace a chance It'll be, just like starting over Nobody told me Easy if you try
Larrysgirl	Re: Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#12	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/07/05 12:15 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thank you Laura and Courtney! Laura, as soon as I read your last part about the guys leaving Slimer alone I got that mental image of Slimer wearing a hat and overcoat and crashing the club! This story has been so much fun to write! As we left off.... The guys sat around the living room feeling bad about what had happened. Probably nobody would come to the Palm Palace now since a ghost was seen there. Micky especially felt bad about yelling at Slimer. The green ghost had just wanted to see his new friends at work and he had yelled at him. Letting out a sigh, Micky stood up and went to get his jacket. "Where you going, Mick?" Peter asked. "I'm going to look for Slimer." Micky replied. "It's my fault I yelled at him, so I'll find him and apologize." "But where could he be?" Davy asked, "This is a very large city." "There's probably lots of abandoned building for him to go to." Mike said. "Well, I'm not going to find him standing here, so..." "So we'll help you." Mike said. Peter and Davy nodded in agreement. Everybody quickly got their jackets and slid down the firepole to the Monkeemobile. Slimer happily followed his new friend home. It turns out Dr. Myers lived in a big home not too far away. The doctor's house was three stories tall with lots of windows. Doctor Myers opened the front door and stepped aside. "After you, my friend." "Thanks doc." Slimer said as he glided inside. When the guys pulled out of the firehouse, Mike stopped the car and looked at his band mates. "Where should we start first?" He asked. Everybody was silent for several seconds then Davy spoke up. "We don't really know Slimer that well yet." He said, "If we did, it would've helped us." "He does like to eat." Peter stated, "Just like Micky." Micky gave the bassist a mock glare as the others laughed. Finally Mike held up his hand. "Wait, Peter has a good idea." "I do?" Peter asked. "Yeah, let's start with the nearest fast-food places and restaurants and go from there." So Mike hit the gas and drove to the nearest burger joint. They got there a few minutes later and Mike pulled the car over to the car. "Ok, now what?" Micky asked. "We cant' just ask, 'excuse me, did you happen to see a green slimy ghost pass by here?'" "We can't?" Peter asked. Davy just rolled his eyes and got out of the car. "What are you looking for Davy?" Mike asked. But Davy kept looking at the ground and suddenly bent down to the sidewalk. "Hello, what's this?" He asked. "What's what, Davy?" Peter said, "Why are you talking to the sidewalk?" "I"ve found Slimer's trail." Davy replied. He ran a finger along the ground and brought it up. The others could see green slime hanging from it. "Way to go, Davy!" Micky exclaimed. "I figured Slimer always leaves slime wherever he goes, so now we just follow the slime." Davy said. "C'mon, let's follow that slime!" Mike said. Davy knocked the slime off his finger and climbed back into the Monkeemobile. Mike put the car in gear and the guys were off after their ghostly friend. Slimer looked around the bigs rooms in Dr. Myers' house. "Big place." Slimer said, "Bigger than firehouse." "Thanks, let me show you where you'll be staying." The doctor said and led him down to the basement. When they got downstairs, Slimer could see it was a laboratory just like his late friend had. "Ooooh." Slimer said as he glided around. "Where I stay?" He asked. "Right here!" Dr. Myer exclaimed. Slimer turned to see Dr. Myer holding what looked like a small vacuum cleaner with a hose attached to it. The green ghost knew what it was immediately...a paranormal prison for ghosts! "Oh no!" Slimer cried and turned to escape, but the doctor turned the machine on and Slimer was quickly sucked through the hose and into the container! He banged on the walls, but it was especially built to hold paranormal creatures like himself. Doctor Myers turned off the machine and held it up. "Gotcha!" He said happily and gave an evil laugh. To Be Continued..... I hope this is taking it in the right direction, Laura. Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Mickys411	who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#13	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/07/05 8:53 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Lisa, you're doing a great job However, I got that dang writer's block again I just hate when that happens, don't you? You or Courtney or anyone else can write the next part, I won't mind Maybe I can get an idea Mickys411 laura the glick grobanite
tysonwolf	Re: Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#14	[-]
Posts: 4909 (05/07/05 10:59 AM) Queen of the Clones CoCo Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	You two are doing a great job! Maybe I'll write a little... "Let me out!" Slimer cried from inside the machine. "I don't think so!" Doctor Myers said with an evil laugh. "You're staying right here!" Slimer slumped back sadly and thought about the Monkees. "Why didn't Slimer listen?" He thought to himself. "Then I not be here." Meanwhile the guys were still driving, following the trail of slime. "Keep going," Davy told Mike "Alright, now turn left." "Davy, I know where I'm going!" The Texan said. Peter laughed at this, but Micky just sat there. "Hey, don't worry Micky," Peter said "We're going to find Slimer." "Yeah, but I still feel bad about yelling at him." Micky said. "He'll probably be mad at me." "I don't think he'll be mad." said Peter. "He really likes you." "I hope he can forgive me." The drummer said. "I think he will." Peter said with a smile. "You're right, Pete." said Micky, who was now smiling back. To be continued.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Instant Karma Mind Games All we are saying, is.... Give peace a chance It'll be, just like starting over Nobody told me Easy if you try
Larrysgirl	Re: Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#15	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/07/05 9:50 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	You did a very nice part, Courtney! Let's see if I can help Laura out here... After several blocks, the trail of slime stopped. "Wait, Mike." Davy said. "Slimer must be around here somewhere." Mike stopped the car and the guys got out and looked around. "Slimer!" Micky called out. "Can you hear me? I'm not mad at you anymore!" There was no response. Mike motioned to the others and they ran over to him. "I have some good news and I have some bad news." He said, "I found the trail of slime again. That's the good news. The bad news is that it leads to that house." Mike pointed to his right. Micky, Peter and Davy followed Mike's finger to the large house of Dr. Myers. Just then there was a flash of lightning, making the place seem even more scary. "Slimer's in there?" Micky asked, gripping Mike's shoulder. Mike nodded his head. "Seems that way." "Well, what are we waiting for?" Davy asked, clapping his hands together. "Someone to talk us out of this?" Peter replied. "Right." Davy replied. "I'm going." Micky said, his voice shaking, "I'm the one who chased Slimer away, so I'll go get him." "We'll be right behind you." Mike said. "We will?" Peter asked, but Mike simply pushed him and Davy in front of him and the four Monkees slowly walked up the sidewalk to the front door. Micky rang the doorbell. When he looked down he noticed more slime on the doorstep and showed it to his band mates. As they waited, Davy turned to the others. "Wait, what are we going to say to whomever or whatever opens the door?" He asked, "We can't ask 'Have you seen a green ghost around here?'" "In this place a green ghost may not be too much out of place." Mike replied. Suddenly the door opened and Doctor Myers appeared. "May I help you?" He asked. "Yes, we...we're looking for someone." Micky squeaked. "He's kinda short and was wearing a hat and trenchcoat." Peter added. "I don't remember seeing anybody like that around here." Doctor Myers lied, "So if you'll excuse me..." "Excuse us, sir." Mike said, "But his trail goes right to your door." He pointed down at the green slime. "Oh, so it does." Dr. Myers replied with a smile, "In that case, I'll just have to ask you boys to come in." Suddenly the Monkees screamed as a trap door in the front porch opened and they fell into the darkness below. (I'm evil aren't I?) To Be Continued....? Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Mickys411	who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#16	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/08/05 9:26 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great Job Lisa You to Courtney Let's see what I can come up with... "Where are we?" asked Peter. "I don't know, it's too dark I can't see a thing," said Mike. "I wish we had some light in here," said Davy. "Anyone got a match on them?" asked Micky. Just then, a light went on. "That's better," said Davy. With a light, the Monkees had a look around to see where they were are. "Where are we?' asked Peter, sounding nervous. "I'm not sure," said Mike. "You're in my lab," said a voice. "Who said that?" asked Micky. "I did," said the voice again. The guys saw a shadow. The shadow moved closer, reveiling the face of Dr.Louis Myers. That's all I can come up with tonight I might finish the story after one of you guys write the next part, but I'm not sure
Larrysgirl	Re: who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#17	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/08/05 11:36 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks Laura! Let's see what I can do now... "My name is Doctor Louis Myers," He said, "I am the nephew of Dr. Yates, whose old firehouse you now live in." "We're the Monkees." Mike said, "We've come for our friend Slimer." "You boys didn't act like he was your friend earlier." Dr. Myers smirked, "I found him wandering around all by himself." "What have you done with him?" Micky demanded, ignoring the jibe. "He's unharmed and in a safe place for now." Dr. Myers replied. "The question now is what am I going to do with you four?" "What do you mean?" Peter asked, getting nervous again. "Well, the experiments I'm about to do with Slimer are a bit unethical and perhaps even illegal, so I can't have you boys going to the police, can I?" "No, I suppose not." Peter replied. "Peter!" Micky, Mike and Davy shouted at him. "Wait a minute, wait a minute." Mike said, grinning at Dr. Myers and folding his arms, "There's four of us and only one of him. What are we afraid of?" "Yeah, we outnumber him!" Micky said. Suddenly, Dr. Myers pulled out a gun. "Except he now has a gun pointed at us." Davy said slowly. "Yeah, I guess that would equal things out a bit." Mike replied. "Put your hands up and walk over toward that metal lab table." Dr. Myers ordered. The Monkees did as they were ordered. The doctor ordered them to sit on the floor next to each table leg. Then using wires, he tied their hands to the table legs. Satisfied they were secure, he walked away and pulled a cloth off a large object. The object turned out to be a big test tube. "What is that?" Peter asked, astounded. "Just what it looks like." Dr. Myers answered, "A large test tube to test your slimy green friend." "What kind of tests?" Mike asked. "Over the years I've studied the paranormal like my uncle. Unlike him, however, I want to know if ghosts can be useful to humanity. I'm going to find out if Slimer can be used for energy or maybe..." His voice dropped down to a whisper, "Or maybe his phastamagoric cells holds the key to eternal life!" The Monkees looked at each other in shock. "You're crackers!" Davy shouted at the doctor. The evil doctor didn't say anything, but simply walked over and picked up a metal cylinder with a tube and attached the tube to the test tube. He turned the cylinder on and Slimer was blown into the larger test tube. Immediately he saw his friends. "Monkees!" He shouted happily. "Hi, Slimer!" The guys shouted back. Slimer tried to leave the test tube, but kept hitting the glass walls. Apparantly, the walls were also made of the same stuff as the cylinder. "Let me go!" Slimer demanded. "Sorry, but you are too valuable to me!" Dr. Myers replied. "Monkees?" Slimer asked. "Sorry Slimer," Micky said, "We're kinda tied up at the moment ourselves." He looked at his hands. "Ooooh I'm sorry, Monkees." Slimer said sadly. "All my fault." "No, it's my fault for yelling at you." Micky said. "This is all very touching." Dr. Myers said sarcastically, "But we've got a lot of work to do tonight." With that, Dr. Myers walked over to a switch... To Be Continued.... I hope this is kind of what you had in mind, Laura. Can't wait to see the finish! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Mickys411	Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#18	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/09/05 6:46 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Okie Dokie Boys and Girls, Cats and (s) Here comes the end As always, many thanks to Lisa and Courtney for your help Thanks again So, without further adu, here we go... While Dr Myers, moved closer to the switch, Slimer was whispering guys. "That's a great idea Slimer," said Davy. Just as Dr.Myers was about to pull the switch, Peter shouted. "Wait a minute Dr.Myers," he said. "What is it?"asked Dr.Myers. "Well, we were thinking," said Micky. "Thinking of what?" "Well, this is your experiment, and it would be selfish of us to test it out," said Mike. Dr.Myers thought for a minute and said,"I never thought of that." Dr.Myers, then untied the Monkees. "Wait a minute, how am I going to be able to test this experiment out," he said. "Well help you," said Slimer. The guys and Slimer then tied down Dr.Myers and strapped him in tightly. "Perfect,"said Mike. But instead of reaching for the switch, Mike got the phone and called the police. "You little punks, you tricked me!" shouted Doctor Myers. "You smart man," said Slimer, giving the doctor a kiss. A few moments later,the police arrived. "So gentlemen, where's Dr.Myers?" asked one police officer. "Follow us officer," said Davy. The Monkees lead the police to where Dr.Myers was tied up. "Gentlemen, I have some bad news and some good news," said the cheif of police. "What's the bad news?" asked Peter. "The bad news is that this isn't Dr.Myers," said the officer. "Then who is he?" asked Micky. "That's the good news, you've capture Dr.Alan Thomas," said the cheif. "Who?" asked Slimer, wearing his disguse, so he wouldn't scare the police. "Dr.Thomas studies the same works as Dr.Yates did, however, Thomas has a warrent for studying his works in unortherdox ways," said the cheif. The police untied Dr.Myers, and placed him in chandcuffs. "By the way, you gentlemen came up with this clever method," said the officer. "I wouldn't had thought of this myself," said the cheif. As the police left, the guys turned to Slimer and thanked him for coming up with the great plan. "By the way Slimer, are you still mad at me?" asked Micky. Slimer removed his disguse and kissed Micky on the cheek. "I guess that means no," said Davy, as he, Peter and Mike laughed. Micky had to laugh to, as he wiped the slime off his face. The next day, the guys were hanging out at the firehouse. Davy was reading a magazine,Mike was tuning his guitar, and Peter and Micky were playing a game of cards with Slimer. Suddenly, there was aknock at the door. "I'll get it," said Mike. He placed the guitar down and answered the door. There stood a man, around his mid 30's with light brown hair and glasses. "Excuse me, said the man, Do the Monkees live here?" "That will be us sir, can we help you?" asked Mike. "My name is Dr.Louis Myers, mind if I come in?" "Sure." Mike invited Dr.Myers inside the firehouse. The other guys stopped what they were doing to see what was happening. "What's going on?" asked Davy. "Guys, this is the real Dr.Myers," said Mike. "Nice to meet you," said Dr.Myers. "You to, said Peter, by the way are you a paranormalist like your uncle?" "No, just your average family physican," said Dr.Myers. "How did you know where we live?' asked Davy. "After Dr.Thomas was arrested, the police located me. You see,Dr.Thomas and my uncle were competing scincetist who worked on the same studies, until Thomas made an aynounmous call on my uncle, forcing him to do his studies here. "That's some story," said Micky. "By the way, does Slimer still live here?" asked Dr.Myers. "You know Slimer?" asked Davy. "Not personally, but I heard a lot about him from my uncle," said Dr.Myers. "Yes, he still lives here," said Mike. "I'll call him, said Peter, Slimer, we have a guest!" Slimer came up to the door. "Slimer, this is Dr.Louis Myers," said Mike. Slimer was a bit nervous about metting this person, because the other person who was Dr.Myers, was a fake. "It's ok, I won't hurt you," said Dr.Myers. He extended a hand and Slimer shook it. "Nice to me you," said Slimer. "You to," said Dr.Myers. "Wait a minute, said Micky,I thought of something. If you're Dr.Yates's nephew, that means you get the firehouse. "Yes, the deed was handed to me as soon as I got into town." "If you get the firehouse, where will we go?" asked Peter. "Actually, the police told me about you, and they told me to give this to you," said Dr.Myers. He handed the guys the deed to the pad. "That Mr.Babbit must really miss you, because as he handed the deed to me, he was crying." The Monkees tried to hold back from laughing, because they didn't want to tell Dr.Myers about what Babbit really thought about the guys moving back to the pad. After sometime, the guys moved back to the pad. The oldfire house was turned into a medical history musemum, and Slimer was invited to live with Dr.Myers and his family at the ranch out in the country. Slimer was a bit sad about leaving, but the guys told Slimer that he as well as Dr.Myers and his family were welcome to visit anytime. Slimer was glad to here that, and said good-bye to the Monkees by giving them each a slimy kiss on the check. And of course Mrs.Purdy was glad that the guys moved back to the pad, and Mr.Babbit wasn't. Meanwhile, Dr.Thomas is still serving 10-15 years. The End Well, what do you think? Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
tysonwolf	Re: Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#19	[-]
Posts: 4909 (05/09/05 11:04 AM) Queen of the Clones CoCo Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I loved it, Laura! Great job everyone! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Instant Karma Mind Games All we are saying, is.... Give peace a chance It'll be, just like starting over Nobody told me Easy if you try
Larrysgirl	Re: Who ya gonna call? (fanfic)	#20	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/09/05 10:23 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I LOVED IT LAURA!! Great ending! Thanks for letting me help you, I'll put this story up on my site ASAP! And thank you Courtney! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!