Nothing To Sneeze At (fanfic)
Here's my new story for the month
Can Peter be allergic to his bandmates?
"Nothing To Sneeze At"
It was a typical night before a gig at the Monkees pad.
Usually Davy would spent hours in the bathroom to get ready for a gig, but this time Mike,Peter and Micky beat him to it.
Now they were yelling at Davy to get a move on.
"Come on Davy let's get going," said Mike, banging on the bathroom door.
"Yeah we'll be late for our gig," said Micky.
"By the time we get to the place , the show will be over," said Peter.
Micky and Mike were about to say something, but just shook their heads.
Moments later, Davy stepped out of the bathroom.
"Sorry guys, but you know I got a date with Kassy after the show," said Davy.
Just then, Mike's nose began to twich.
"What is that horrible scent?" he asked.
"For your information, this happens to be my new colonge, said Davy, A new fragence called "Scent of Passion."
"Smells pretty old to me," said Micky, pinching his nose.
Peter sneezed a few times then said with a stuffed nose,"I can't smell a thing."
He sneezed again and again and again.
"You don't sound to good there Peter," said Mike.
"But I fi..fi..fi..achoo! fine," said Peter, still sounding stuffed up.
"Not with all that sneezing.
I think you better get to bed and rest up, I'll cancel the job.
"Ok Mike."
As Peter went back to the bedroom, countinuing to sneeze.
"Consutite," said Micky.
"Thank you," said Peter, closing the door.
Mike then called the club to cancel their job, then Davy called Kassy to meet up for an early date.
The next morning, Mike and Micky were surprise to see Peter in the kitchen making breakfast.
"Peter, what are you doing out of bed?" asked Mike.
"Yeah, I thought you were sick," said Micky.
"I feel better," said Peter, cooking eggs.
Just then, Davy came to join them.
"Moring guys, he said, Glad to see you're feeling better Peter."
"Me to..achoo!" said Peter, with a sneeze.
"You know, I think I'll have cereal."
Peter then said with a stuffed up nose,"Odd I thought I was feeling better."
"I guess not, you better go see a doctor."
Sometime later, the guys were at the doctor's office waiting for Peter who was in an examing room, whilr the other guys waited in the other room.
Mike and Davy read magazines, and Micky was reading a paper.
"Hey, according to my horiscope says I will come to riches," he said.
"Micky, you don't believe this," said Davy.
"It was the only thing worth reading."
Micky then spotted something on the floor.
"Hey I found a quarter," he said.
Just then, Peter came out of on of the examing room.
"Well, what is it Peter?" Mike asked.
"According to the doctor, I have a bad allergy," said Peter with another sneeze.
"That's odd."
"What's is it?" asked Davy.
"I didn't sneeze at all with the doctor," said Peter.
"I wonder what you can be allergic to?" asked Micky.
"I'm not su..su..achoo! sure," sniffed Peter.
More to come
Mickys411 (Laura)
Can Peter be allergic to his bandmates?
"Nothing To Sneeze At"
It was a typical night before a gig at the Monkees pad.
Usually Davy would spent hours in the bathroom to get ready for a gig, but this time Mike,Peter and Micky beat him to it.
Now they were yelling at Davy to get a move on.
"Come on Davy let's get going," said Mike, banging on the bathroom door.
"Yeah we'll be late for our gig," said Micky.
"By the time we get to the place , the show will be over," said Peter.
Micky and Mike were about to say something, but just shook their heads.
Moments later, Davy stepped out of the bathroom.
"Sorry guys, but you know I got a date with Kassy after the show," said Davy.
Just then, Mike's nose began to twich.
"What is that horrible scent?" he asked.
"For your information, this happens to be my new colonge, said Davy, A new fragence called "Scent of Passion."
"Smells pretty old to me," said Micky, pinching his nose.
Peter sneezed a few times then said with a stuffed nose,"I can't smell a thing."
He sneezed again and again and again.
"You don't sound to good there Peter," said Mike.
"But I fi..fi..fi..achoo! fine," said Peter, still sounding stuffed up.
"Not with all that sneezing.
I think you better get to bed and rest up, I'll cancel the job.
"Ok Mike."
As Peter went back to the bedroom, countinuing to sneeze.
"Consutite," said Micky.
"Thank you," said Peter, closing the door.
Mike then called the club to cancel their job, then Davy called Kassy to meet up for an early date.
The next morning, Mike and Micky were surprise to see Peter in the kitchen making breakfast.
"Peter, what are you doing out of bed?" asked Mike.
"Yeah, I thought you were sick," said Micky.
"I feel better," said Peter, cooking eggs.
Just then, Davy came to join them.
"Moring guys, he said, Glad to see you're feeling better Peter."
"Me to..achoo!" said Peter, with a sneeze.
"You know, I think I'll have cereal."
Peter then said with a stuffed up nose,"Odd I thought I was feeling better."
"I guess not, you better go see a doctor."
Sometime later, the guys were at the doctor's office waiting for Peter who was in an examing room, whilr the other guys waited in the other room.
Mike and Davy read magazines, and Micky was reading a paper.
"Hey, according to my horiscope says I will come to riches," he said.
"Micky, you don't believe this," said Davy.
"It was the only thing worth reading."
Micky then spotted something on the floor.
"Hey I found a quarter," he said.
Just then, Peter came out of on of the examing room.
"Well, what is it Peter?" Mike asked.
"According to the doctor, I have a bad allergy," said Peter with another sneeze.
"That's odd."
"What's is it?" asked Davy.
"I didn't sneeze at all with the doctor," said Peter.
"I wonder what you can be allergic to?" asked Micky.
"I'm not su..su..achoo! sure," sniffed Peter.
More to come
Mickys411 (Laura)
I can't wait for more 
This is great as usual, girls~
He ran away!
He could run to my place and no it's not what you think i'm thinking 
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