Mr. Babbit and Mr. Hyde (fanfic)

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Larrysgirl	Mr. Babbit and Mr. Hyde (fanfic)	Lead	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/09/06 11:51 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Hi all! Here's my new fic! It's a comedy about why is Mr. Babbit so nice one minute and mean the next. Read and find out... Of course, Laura or whomever wants to can lend a hand. The Monkees were in the driveway in front of their pad giving the Monkeemobile a tuneup. Micky was under the car, putting the plug back up in the oil pan. Peter was above him, bending over the engine. Suddenly, oil began to flow through the hole, dripping onto Micky's face! He barely was able to put the plug back into its hole before his whole face was covered in oil! Growling, Micky got up from under the car and tapped Peter on the shoulder. Peter turned and jumped back in fright. "Who are you?" Peter exclaimed. "It's me, Peter." Micky said, "Next time wait until I say so to pour the oil." "Oh, I'm sorry, Micky." Peter said, pulling out a rag. He then tried to wipe Micky's face, but only succeeded in smearing the oil around. Micky grabbed the rag from Peter. "I'll do it, Peter." Micky said. "You better go inside and wash up, Mick." Mike said as he and Davy tried to control their laughter. "Yeah, I'll guess I'll have to." Micky replied, then went into the pad. "Well, I've put in new spark plugs, so let's see how she sounds." Mike said, turning the key. Mike stated the car, and it made a loud noise, but then settled down to a nice purr. "Sounds pretty good." Davy remarked. Suddenly, their landlord Mr. Babbit walked up the drive. "Uh oh." Peter whispered, "Babbit's gonna complain about the noise." "Oh hi, boys!" Mr. Babbit said, looking the Monkeemobile over, "Giving your car a tuneup eh?" "Yeah, Mr. Babbit." Mike said, "Sorry about the noise." "We're trying to get it fixed up." Davy added quickly. "Oh, that's ok." Babbit said with a smile, "When I was young I used to fix up my old cars. Sometimes they'd need a lot of fixing, but it was worth it. This sure is a nice looking GTO." The three Monkees looked in shock at each other. They thought sure Babbit would yell at them. "Oh well, gotta run. See you later!" Babbit said with a wave. "Bye, Mr. Babbit." Peter said, unable to believe his ears. When Babbit was out of earshot, Mike looked at his bandmates. "Were we dreaming?" He asked. "That's the first time he ever said anything nice about our car." Davy said. Micky came back outside and joined the others. His face was now clean. He notice the shocked looks on his friends' faces. "What's wrong?" He asked. "Babbit was acting nice to us." Mike replied. "Even said he liked our car." Davy added. "You guys are putting me on." Micky laughed. "No, it's true." Peter said, "He was even smiling." "He must be up to something." Micky said seriously. The other three Monkees nodded in agreement. To Be Continued... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Mr. Babbit and Mr. Hyde (fanfic)	#1	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/10/06 9:52 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great start Lisa Here's what I got... "Why do you think Babbit is acting so nice to us?"Mike asked, as he was putting the plugs into the car. "Maybe he's sick," said Peter. "Peter, if anything Mr. Babbit is only is sick of us being laste on rent." Davy picked up a portable radio and said," You guys mind if I turn it on?" "Go ahead babe, maybe we can get the work done faster that way," said Micky. Davy turned on the radio, and countiuned to help the guys with the car. A few seconds later, Babbit appeared in front of the garage. But he didn't have the smile, but his usual sour looking face. Though the guys were too busy fixing the car to notice. Babbit cleared his throat, and that got the Monkees attention. "Hell-o again Mr. Babbit," said Peter. "What do you mean by again?"Babbit asked. "We saw you earlier pulling up in front of your house," said Davy. "Yeah, and even came over and talked to us," said Mike. "I did no such thing, I've been my house all day cleaning. And now, I'd like some peace and quiet, so turn that junk you call music off." And with that, Babbit stormed off. "Well, he sure didn't sound that jolly to me," said Micky. That's all I got Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Mr. Babbit and Mr. Hyde (fanfic)	#2	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/10/06 11:31 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great going, Laura! "Boy did he do a turn-around." Davy remarked as he turned off the radio. "He even denied being nice to us." Peter said sadly. "I guess he was in a good mood only for a few seconds." Mike added, then slammed the hood. "Well, that's it. The Monkee Mobile is all tuned up. Let's take her for a spin." The others agreed and piled into the car. Soon, they were roaring down the highway. As they drove along, Micky tapped Mike on the shoulder. "Hey Mike, there's a food store. We need a few things." "Ok, let's go in." Mike said as he turned the car into the parking lot. Inside the grocery store, the guys quickly filled up their cart with food. They then got into the check-out line. "Good thing we have another gig coming up." Mike remarked as he looked at all the food in the cart. "Most of this will be eaten by Micky." Davy smiled. "Ha ha, Davy." Micky smirked, "As if you don't sneak downstairs at night for a snack." "That was only once, Micky..." Davy started to say, but was interuppted by a familiar voice. "Oh hello boys." The voice said. The guys turned to see Mr. Babbit standing behind them. "Oh, hi Mr. Babbit." Peter gulped. "You're done with your cleaning?" He asked. "Cleaning? I have to admit I'm a bit lazy in that department, son." Babbit laughed, "No, I just wanted to get out and get a few things. Are you four done with your car?" "Yeah, it's all done." Mike said quickly, "Um, would you like to go in front of us?" "Oh no, I'll wait. I have nothing else to do." Babbit smiled. The guys looked at one another but said nothing. Fortunately, the guys were next and they were quickly checked through. "See you later, Mr. Babbit." Davy said. "See you later, boys." Babbit replied, putting his items on the belt. The Monkees made a quick exit from the store, and even more quickly put their items in the car and took off. "What is going on?" Micky asked, looking scared, "One minute Babbit's nice and the next he's his old self again." "I dunno." Davy replied, "Something funny is going on with Babbit." "Do you think we should interfere?" Mike asked, "He might be just having mood swings." "He's a guy, Mike." Micky replied. "Still, maybe a little call to Babbit's house solve the mystery." Davy said. To Be Continued... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Mr Babbit and Mr Hyde (fanfic)	#3	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/11/06 9:05 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	This is a real funny and cute story Lisa Here's some more.... As the guys drove home from the store, all the guys thought about was how Babbit's odd mood swings. "So, who's going to be the one to call Babbit?"Davy asked his bandmates. "You," Micky,Mike and Peter answered altogether. "Why me?" "You were the one who made the suggestion?" said Mike. "Fine." When the Monkees got home, Davy went to call Babbit, while Peter,Micky and Mike put the groseries away. Davy dialed the phone and waited for answer. 'Hell-O," said a gruffed voice at the other end of the line. Sure enough, it was Babbit. "Hell-o, it's Davy from next door," Davy spoke into the phone. "Yeah, what do you want, I'm in the middle of watching the game and you just made me miss a touch down." "You know sir, it's funny that you're watching a game, because the guys and I just saw you at the supermaket." "That long hair must be getting to your brains, I wasn't at the supermarket. Like I told you guys, I was cleaning my house all day, and now I'm trying to watch the game, which you are making me miss. Now if you would excuse me, I just another pass. Babbit hung up the phone. "Babbit said he wasn't at the store," said Davy, hanging up the phone. "Maybe Babbit cloned himself," said Micky. "Micky, that is the most rediculous explanation," said Mike. "Yeah, you can't clone yourself," said Peter. "But I saw it in a movie the other night, said Micky, This guy cloned himself, and the clone had a different personality from the person." "That's it, no more late night movies for you," said Mike. The plot thickens Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Mr Babbit and Mr Hyde (fanfic)	#4	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/12/06 1:13 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thank you Laura! That night Micky was pacing back and forth in the living room while the other Monkees were trying to watch TV. "Micky sit down!" Davy exclaimed, "You're missing the best part where King Kong climbs the Empire State Building!" "How could Babbit claim to be at home, when all four of us saw him at the store today?" Micky asked. "For the thousandth time, Micky." Mike said, shooting him an annoyed look, "Either Babbit's lying or on drugs, or..." "Or he's been cloned!" Micky finished. "For the thousand and one times, Micky," Peter said, "You can't clone yourself!" "How about if aliens did it?" Micky asked. "You know, kinda like, "Invasion of the body snatchers" or something like that?" Mike rubbed his temples. "Micky go to sleep, your imagination is working overtime." Just then, the doorbell rang. "I'll get it." Micky said, wondering who could be calling at this late hour. When Micky opened the door, none other than Mr. Babbit was standing there, wearing a lab coat over his clothes. "Um, hi Mr. Babbit." Micky said, "Come on in." "Thank you." Babbit smiled as he walked inside. The other Monkees got up from the couch to see what Babbit wanted. "I'm sorry to bother you at this late hour, but I was wondering if you boys had any baking soda? I forgot to buy some at the store today." "I...I think so, Mr. Babbit." Peter stuttered and ran off to the kitchen. "Doing a little experiment?" Micky asked slowly. "Yes, and I always seem to forget something." Babbit replied, shaking his head. Peter ran over to Babbit with the box of baking soda and tripped, spilling some of the white powder on him. "Oh, I'm sorry, Mr. Babbit." Peter exclaimed. "That's ok." Babbit laughed, taking the box. "I'm a messy person." "Weren't you cleaning today?" Davy asked. "No, I only clean when I need to." Babbit replied, "Why do you ask?" "You told me on the phone today you were cleaning." Davy replied. "It wasn't me you were talking to." Babbit replied, looking puzzled, "You must've been talking to someone else. Well, I gotta go. Thank you and I'll return this tomorrow." "See you, Mr. Babbit." Mike said, waving. "Bye." Mr. Babbit waved back and left the pad. When the door was closed, everyone looked at Micky. "You know, Micky, you might be onto something here." Mike said. To Be Continued... If it's ok with you Laura, I'm gonna finish this up tomorrow or so. Thank you for your help! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Larrysgirl	Re: Mr Babbit and Mr Hyde (fanfic)	#5	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/13/06 1:04 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Here's more! The next morning after breakfast, Peter went into the kitchen to bake a cake. As he gathered up the ingredients, Peter realized he was missing the baking soda. "Oh no, the baking soda is with Mr. Babbit." He frowned. "He said he would return it, Peter." Davy replied. "This would be a great excuse to see what's up with Babbit." Micky remarked. "Then go ahead and ask Babbit for the baking soda back." Mike said. "Me? But Peter's the one baking the cake!" Micky exclaimed. "You suggested it, Micky." Peter said, "I'm not going over there." "Neither are we." Davy added as he and Mike shook their heads. "Let's draw straws!" Micky suggested. "Ok, shortest straw wins." Mike said. He got out some paper and pens and passed them out. The guys quickly drew straws on the paper and then laid them side by side for comparison. It was soon clear Micky had drawn the shortest straw of the four. "Oh man, I knew I should've used two pieces of paper." Micky sighed. "Go ahead, Micky." Davy said, "We'll watch from the side kitchen window." "Thanks." Micky said with a smirk, 'Me and my big mouth.' Micky thought to himself. Micky walked out of the pad and over to Babbit's house which was next to the pad. Gathering up his courage, he knocked on the door. A few seconds later, the door opened and Babbit stood in the doorway. He was once again wearing a lab coat over his clothes. "Oh hello! Nice to see you! How can I help you?" Babbit said happily. "Um, hi Mr. Babbit." Micky said, "I'm here to ask for the baking soda back. Peter needs to bake a cake." "Oh yes, I'm sorry." Babbit replied, "I forgot about that. Come on in." "Thank you." Micky said, stepping inside. "Come on, I'll show you my latest masterpiece." Babbit said, motioning to Micky with his hand. Trying to hide his nervousness, Micky followed Babbit into the kitchen. When Micky stepped into the room, he got the shock of his life: Standing there was another Mr. Babbit! To Be Concluded...(I hope) Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Mr. Babbit and Mr. Hyde	#6	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/13/06 9:36 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Awsome story Lisa Can't wait to see the end Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Mr. Babbit and Mr. Hyde	#7	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/13/06 9:58 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks, Laura! I'll try to finish it tomorrow! (though everyone's probably figured it out by now) Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Larrysgirl	Re: Mr Babbit and Mr Hyde (fanfic)	#8	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/15/06 12:30 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	And Now... "AHHH!!" Micky screamed. "What's the matter?" The Babbit wearing the lab coat asked. "What are you doing here?" Demanded the other Babbit of Micky. "Two Babbits! Two Babbits! Ahhh!" Micky screamed, running away. "After him!" The second Babbit told the first. Watching from the pad, Mike, Peter and Davy heard Micky's scream. "That was Micky!" Davy exclaimed. "Something's wrong." Peter said, looking worried. Suddenly, they saw Micky running through Babbit's house-with two identical Babbits chasing him. "Did you see that?" Mike asked, unable to believe his eyes. Peter and Davy nodded their heads. "Let's go!" Mike said, as he led the other two Monkees out of the pad. Meanwhile, the two Babbits had Micky cornered in the basement. "Please don't hurt me!" Micky cried, "I won't tell anyone!" "Tell anyone what?" The Babbit wearing the lab coat asked. "That you've cloned yourself." The voice of Mike said. The two Babbits turned to see Mike, Peter and Davy standing behind them. "What are you long-haired weirdoes doing in my house?" The Babbit not wearing a lab coat demanded. "We didn't want you to hurt Micky." Peter replied. "Wait a minute, wait a minute." The Babbit wearing the lab coat put in, "Cloned myself?" "Yeah, well...how do explain the two of you being identical?" Davy asked. The two Babbits looked at each other, then back at the Monkees. "Ever hear of identical twins?" The Babbit without the lab coat asked sarcastically. There was a profound silence for several seconds until Micky squeaked, "Twins?" "Yes, twins." The Babbit with the lab coat replied, "Henry and I are twin brothers." "This is my brother Harry." His brother said. "Older brother." Harry smiled. "Only by two minutes." The other Babbit shot back. Harry chuckled and turned back to the Monkees. "I'm sorry if I didn't introduce myself before." He said, shaking his head "I had no idea I would cause such confusion." "That's for sure." Davy replied. "What made you think he had cloned himself?" Babbit demanded. "The lab coat and talking about his latest masterpeice." Micky replied, "Then I saw the two of you." "I was referring to my cake." Harry replied, "I wore this lab coat so as not to get dirty." "Oh man, I'm sorry, Mr. Babbit." Micky said. "It's ok." Harry replied. "Yeah, now the mystery is solved, so get out!" Babbit demanded. "Oh Henry, it was an honest mistake." Harry said, "C'mon upstairs, I'll give you boys a some of my cake." Babbit sputtered in protest, but soon everyone was upstairs eating Harry's pound cake. The guys told him what they did and Harry told them he lived on the East coast and worked for a chemical company. After apologizing again, the Monkees, with the baking soda, left Babbit's house. "Man, what a shock." Mike said, "Babbit has a twin brother." "Yeah, a nice one at that." Peter added. "Such a difference." "Too bad Harry didn't clone himeself." Davy put in. "Why Davy?" Micky asked. "So they'd be more of me for all the girls!" Davy laughed. The other three chased Davy into the pad. The End Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
NoraLou	Re: Mr Babbit and Mr Hyde (fanfic)	#9	[-]
Posts: 12465 (05/15/06 12:35 AM) Rev. Nora Paperback writer Amazing Grace New Admin Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Cute story! I see we tend to think creatively at the same time, Larry's Girl!
Mickys411	Mr. Babbit and Mr. Hyde	#10	[-]
Posts: 2229 (05/15/06 9:51 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great story Lisa Real funny and cute Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Mr. Babbit and Mr. Hyde	#11	[-]
Posts: 1316 (05/16/06 12:43 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thank you Laura and Nora! I was going to name the story 'The Two Mr. Babbits' or 'A Tale of Two Babbits' but I figured it might give away the suspense! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!