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Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	Lead	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/18/06 12:14 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Here's a brand new story Based on the popular Beatles animated film with a Monkees twist.... "Yellow Submarine" On one rainy afternoon, the Monkees decided to catch a movie at the theater on the strip. The film they saw turned out to be a movie about a group of singers who went traveling in a submarine. The guys were really impressed it. "Man, that was some groovy film," said Micky as he and the other Monkees got out of the theater, when the movie ened. "Yeah, out of site," Davy added. "It had everything, great music, action, and it had some funny parts as well," said Mike. "It wasn't even scary," said Peter. "Execpt when the monster attack the submarine," said Mike. "And you accidently threw your popcorn," said Davy. "Which landed on me," said Micky, picking a kernel out of his curly hair. The guys still countinued to talk about the movie when they got in the monkeemoblie, driving down the strip, stopping at the pizza parlor for a bit to eat, driving home and even when the got in the pad. Even when they got ready for bed all Peter could think about was the movie. "Hey guys, how come we never get to go on any adventures?" he asked. "Peter, we had a lot of adventures," Mike answered. "Really?" "Sure, remember when we saved Pop's resturaunt from Fuselli?" Davy asked. "But we got arrested because the police though we were the Purple flower gang even though we had white flowers," said Peter. "Do you know how tough it is to find purple flowers Peter?" Micky said. "Good point." "And what about when we stopped that gang of pirates from robbing the Queen Anne?" asked Davy. "How come I don't remember that event?" Mike asked. "Because you were too sea sick.' Micky answered. "Anyway, you see Peter, we've had a lot of adventures." "I suppose you're right," said Peter. That night, all Peter was dreaming about was riding in a submarine, across the bottom of the ocean. The next morning after breakfast, the guys began to practice for an up coming gig, when suddenly the pad began to shake. "Oh, no! It's a volcano!" Peter cried. "Peter's there's no volcanos in California," said Micky. "Really?" "Then what could it be?"Davy asked. "I can only think of one thing at this moment," said Mike. The other Monkees understood what he was saying. "Earthquake!" the guys shouted together as they jumped off the bandstand and ducked behind the couch. Just then, the shaking stopped. The guys looked around the pad. Though some items fell off the walls and out of some shelves, there was no real damage done. The guys then carefully got out from behind the couch. "That was odd," said Davy. "It sure was," said Mike. "It wasn't really much of an earthquake," said Peter. "Maybe it was an aftershock," said Micky. "I don't know, but I think we should go outside and take a look around," said Mike. The Monkees crept up to the door, opened it carefully, poked their heads out, then causiously stepped out the pad. Though some shingles fell off the roof, there was no damage at all. Even the car was in one piece. "Do you guys see anything different?"Mike asked his bandmates. "No," Davy answered. "Nothing that I could see," said Micky. "Every house on the block looks fine and so does that yellow submarine in the middle of the street," said Peter. "That's good, maybe it was an small aftershock then," said Mike. Just as he and the other Monkees were walking back into the pad, the all stopped. "Wait a minute Peter, did you say yellow submarine?"Mike asked. "Yes I did," Peter answered. "Where did you say it was?" Davy asked. "In the middle of the street." The guys turned around and sure enough, in the middle of the road was a large and yellow submarine. "What do you suppose it's doing here?" Davy asked. "I wonder if somebody's in there," said Micky. "This is just like the movie," said Peter. "Now cool it fellas, said Mike, Let's just wait and see what happens." And sure enough, at that moment, the hatch of the sub began to opened and out came a person. The Monkees screamed as did the person. But soon, all was slince, until Davy spoke up. "Why did you screamed?"he asked the person. "Well, I screamed, because you did, the person answered, By the way you all were in perfect pitch." "Thank you," said Peter. The person the jumped off the submarine. The person turned out to be a man in his late 50's with light grey hair and was wearing tan pants, brown boots, and a blue coat and matching captain's hat, almost dressed like a sailor. "Oh forgive me, I'm Fred,"the man said exdending a hand. "Nice to meet you Fred, we're the Monkees," Mike said, exchanging hand shakes with Fred. "Oh a chimp act?"Fred asked. "Oh, no, we're musican," Davy answered. "Really?" "Yes, and can I asked a question? Peter asked Fred, Why are you here?" "I need your H.E.L.P.," Fred answered. "H.E.L.P.?"The Monkees asked altogether. "Yes. H is for Hurry E is for Ergent L is for Love me P is for Please help "Sure, we'll be glad to help," Davy answered. "Oh bless you," Fred answered. "Did we sneezed?"Peter asked. "Exactly how can we help?"Micky asked. "By saving my home city," answered Fred. "Where's that?"Mike asked. "Pepperland." The Monkees stood there in complete shock. "Pepperland?"they asked at the same time. "Yes, located 80,000 leages under the sea, that's why I have this submarine," Fred answered. "Wow, that's quite a trip. Would you like to come in the pad and take a rest?"Davy asked. "Yes that will be nice thank you." The guys invited Fred inside that pad and Davy made him some tea. "Thank you, that was just what I needed," said Fred, drinking the tea. "So Fred, can you tell us why Pepperland needs your help?"Mike asked. Fred then began to tell the Monkees that for a long time, Pepperland was a beautiful land that was full of color and music, until the evil blue meanines took over. Hiding anything that makes music away,a nd turning everyone including their mayor into blue statues. "That's one sad story," Peter sniffed. "That's why I need your help," said Fred. "Could we think about it for a minute?"Mike asked. "Take your time." The guys then headed into the kitchen/dinning room to decided on what to do. That's enogh writing for the night Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#1	[-]
Posts: 1316 (02/18/06 2:53 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Woo! What a start, Laura! "That's some story Fred just told us." Mike said. "Yeah, it's just like the movie we saw yesterday." Peter replied. "Yes, but that was a movie, Peter." Davy said to him, "It was just a fantasy." "Well, the fantasy is now parked in the middle of the street." Micky pointed out. "Babbit's probably called the police by now." Mike replied. "We gotta help Fred, guys." Peter begged, "We can't let Pepperland stay under control of the evil Blue Meanies." "Yeah, I guess you're right, Peter." Mike told him, "If those other singers could do it, so can we." "Ok, I'm in." Micky said, "How about you, Davy?" Davy shrugged his shoulders. "Why not? Things have been a little boring around here." "Let's go tell Fred." Mike replied. So the guys walked back into the living room and over to Fred. "We've decided to help you, Fred." Micky said. "Oh bless you, young fellows!" Fred exclaimed, splashing tea on himself. "Did we sneeze?" Peter asked. Fred put his teacup down and led the guys out of the pad. Mike made sure the door was locked and then followed the others over to the submarine. To Be Continued... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#2	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/19/06 12:04 AM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Good Job Lisa Here's what I got... "Wait a minute, said Peter, I think we forgot something." "What's that?"Micky asked. "If Fred said that all the instruments are gone, I think we'd better get ours." "You Peter, that's a good point," said Davy. "Thank you," Peter beamed. So the guys went back into the pad, collecting their instruments and Mike locked the door as they headed back outside. "Ok, we're all ready now," said Micky. "Wonderful, let's go," said Fred, as he climbed up the submarine and opened the hatch. The Monkees followed him. Soon everyone was aboard and with Fred at the driver's seat, they took off. The sub began to float up into the sky. "You know, this may be a submarine, but I feel more air sick than sea sick," said Davy, clutching stomach. "Not to worry, we're almost at the ocean," said Fred, streeing the wheel of the sub. And sure enough, the sub reached the ocean. Fred lowered the sub gentley done to the water, and began to dissapeared into the ocean. Soon, the submarine was fully under water, and as it went through the sea, the guys couldn't believe what they saw. All different kinds of fish, under water life and plants. "Groovy," said Peter admiring what he was seeing. "I've never seen anything like this either," said Davy. "Hold on tight, we're pulling ahead at full speed," said Fred. And indded, the submarine headed deeper into the ocean. As Fred drove the sub ferther down the sea, the Monkees saw something that they never expected to see in the water. "Are..Are those clocks?"Peter asked, pointing to the objects out the window. "Yes, we're traveling through the sea of time, said Fred, one of the many seas we have to travel through." "You mean there's more?"Mike asked. "How many?"Micky asked. "Quite a few, Fred answered, There's the sea of time, which were going through right now, then the sea of scince, sea of monsters,sea of nothing, the foothills of the headlands, sea of holes, and the sea of green, which will take us directly to Pepperland." "That sure is lot of seas," said Davy. "It's not that long of a trip actually," said Fred. "I think I got that motion sickness again. I'm feeling quite lighthead." "I'm begining to feel funny to," said Mike. "Same here," said Micky. "Me to." said Peter. Suddenly, the Monkees began to shirnk, not only in size, but in age as well and turned into children. Though Fred stayed the same height, his grey hair turned black. "What's going on?"Davy asked in a child voice. "I'm scared, and I want to go home," sniffed Peter who spoke in the same tone of voice and began to cry. "Don't worry boys, we'll get out of here," said Fred, who handed Peter a handkerchif to blow his nose. "How do we get out of here?"Mike asked, sound like a young child as well. "Straight ahead and we'd better get out of here soon, before we become any young and dissapear. It's going to take a lot of force so I need your help." "Ok," said Micky, in a child's voice. However, since every button and lever on the sub was high up and the guys being child size, they either had to jump or climb on one another shoulder's to reach. But soon, the sub moved faster and the Monkees and Fred went back to their normal ages. "That was a close one," said Mike. "You can say that again," said Davy. "I don't know if it's the motion of the sub, but I;m feeling funny again," said Micky. "Same here," said Peter. Indeed the guys and Fred changed again, but instead of getting young, they all got older. As they got older, the beards that were growing on their faces grew longer. "Now what do we do?" Mike asked in an older tone of voice. "What did you say?"Davy asked, sounding the same way. "Were you talking to me?"Peter asked talking the same his bandmates were. "What, something about a bee?"Micky asked, in the tone as well. "Don't worry, I'll get us out. I hope," Fred said in the tone of voice the Monkees were using. Despite having trouble seeing with his beard in the way, Fred managed to get himself, the Monkees and the sub out of the sea of time, and soon they were all back to their normal ages once again. "Why, that was some trip," said Davy, sounding in his regular voice. "It sure was," said Mike, talking in his normal voice. "I didn't like being young again," said Peter in his regular voice. "Why?"Micky asked in his normal voice. "I got picked on a lot when I was younger." "Hold on, we're entering the sea of scince," said Fred in his regular voice. "Why do they call it the sea of scince?"Davy asked. "Look out the window and see for yourself." The guys did just that, and sure enough out the windows of the sub, different patterns, shapes and ojects flew pass by them. "All the time traveling we did wore me out a bit, do one of you boys mind taking over?"Fred asked the Monkees. "Can I?"Peter asked. "Sure, of course." Fred then climbed out of the driver's seat and Peter took his place. "Drive carefully, we're about to enter the sea of Monster," said Fred. "Monsters?"Peter asked with a gulp. Fred was right, for sure enough out the window, the guys and Fred saw many types of odd looking creatures. "Not to panic we'll be just fine, said Fred, who then pointed to something at the main controls at the wheel, Just as long as you don't push this button." "Which button?"Peter asked. Fred poited again and said,"That button." "You mean this button?" Peter pushed the button and not only was he ejected from the driver's seat, but the submarine. "That was the painc button," said Fred. Peter countinued to fly across the sea of monsters, passing by the odd creatures. Until, he landed on something that looked in betweent a step stool and a horse, which galloped as soon as Peter got on. "Help! Help!"Peter cried out. "Oh no, Peter's getting away," said Davy, looking through the sub's pariscope. "What do we do now?"Mike asked. "Learn to sing trio?"said Fred. "No, we're going to save him," said Micky, taking the wheel. Though he put the sub in reverse, he managed to drive it straight forward. Take it away Lisa or anybody else Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#3	[-]
Posts: 1316 (02/19/06 2:04 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Outta sight, Laura! "Faster, Micky, faster!" Davy yelled at him. "I'm trying, but I can't see where I'm going!" Micky yelled back, "This thing doesn't have rearview mirrors!" "Allow me." Fred said, taking the controls. He quickly spun the submarine around and soon they were back on Peter's trail. "Help! Help!" Peter yelled. All the yelling brought the unwanted attention of other horse-like creatures. They had the upper torso of men, but their bodies were like horses. With a war cry, they began to chase after Peter and his runaway horse creature, firing arrows as they did so. "Things just went from bad to worse." Mike remarked. "They kinda look like Indians." Micky said. An arrow hit the creature Peter was riding. The creature reared up in pain, sending Peter to the ground. Then the creature ran off once again, leaving Peter alone with the other creatures coming after him. "Uh oh!" Peter cried. He began to climb a rocky wall, just as the half-horse creatures arrived. They began to fire arrows once again. "Fred, do something!" Davy shouted at him. Fred lowered the sub down to the ground and pushed a button. The front of the sub pulled back and the U.S. Seventh calvary, trumpet blaring, came charging out. The soldiers attacked the creatures and soon drove them away. Peter climbed down the wall and then climbed up on a horse riden by John Wayne. "Thank you, sir." Peter said. "You're welcome, young man." John Wayne said, "But next time, don't hit that button!" "I won't sir." Peter replied as the calvary charged back into the sub. The other three Monkees and Fred were waiting for him. "Are you ok, Peter?" Mike asked. "Yeah, I'm fine." Peter replied. "I hope you've learned a lesson, Peter." Fred said sternly. "I have Fred." Peter said sincerely. "Very well." Fred said, smiling again, "Next is the sea of Nothing. We have no time to waste!" To Be Continued... (what a story) Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#4	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/19/06 11:37 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great job Lisa Just like the movie As we left off.... Just as Fred was about the sub into forward, the guys and Fred felt something pulling them backwards. "What's that?"Peter asked. "Oh, no!"Davy cried looking out the window. He, Peter, Micky and Mike looked out the windows of the sub to see that there was a monster's that had a nose like a bicycle horn, but had a suction like a vaccum. "We gotta get out of here!" shouted Micky. "I can't seem to get the sub in action, you boys better give me a hand," said Fred from the driver's seat. "Come oh fellas,"said Mike, as he began to turn some knobs. The other Monkees joined him, but it was no use, for at that moment, the vaccum monster sucked the sub in it's nose. After that, the monster sucked all of the sea of monsters, then it's self, leaving a black,white scenery. Suddenly, the submarine appeared. It spun around for a few minutes, until it dropped to the ground with a thud. "Oh dear, the motor's died out," said Fred. "Just pop the hood and check it out," said Mike. Fred climbed out of his seat and headed tp the back of the sub. "Fred, what are you doing?"Davy asked. "Checking the motor,"Fred answered. Fred reached the back of the sub, opened a samll door and sure enough inside was the engine. Micky walked up to Fred and asked,"Is that the engine?" "Yes, you know about fixing engines?"Fred asked. "Well, I worked on the monkeemoblie a number of times, this can't be any different. Micky placed a finger on the engine and got a bit of a shock. "Well, what do you think?"Fred asked. "I think I burned my finger," said Micky, shaking his hand to cool it off. "Maybe we can call a road service," Davy suggested. "No can do" said Fred. "Because there's no phones on the sub?"Mike asked. "Plus, no road either." "And we're no sub-scribers. Get it sub-scribers?"said Peter with a laugh. The other Monkees and Fred groned. Just then, Davy saw something out the window. "Looks like we're not the only ones here," he said. "What do you mean?"Mike asked. "Come on, let's see what it is." The guys stepped out of the sub to get a colser look of the thing Davy was talking about. Sure enough,they saw something, or rather someone. It was an unusal creature with a blue face,pink ears that match his fluffy pink tail, and brown fur all over. The creature was hard at work on a typewriter. What will happen next? Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#5	[-]
Posts: 1316 (02/20/06 2:36 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	still laughing The Monkees and Fred approached the creature who continued to type away on his typewriter. It seemed totally oblivious to the new visitors. "Ahem." Fred cleared his throat. The creature continued its typing until finally it pulled the sheet of paper out of the typewriter. "Ah, my masterpiece! It is finished!" It exclaimed. "It speaks English!" Davy exclaimed. "Why yes, young man." The creature exclaimed, "English, French, German and Dutch! Now what shall I have for lunch?" The creature began to walk away. "Excuse us, sir." Peter said, "We need your help." "You need my help, my aid, my assistance?" The creature said, turning back to Peter in surprise. "Yes we do." Mike said, "Our motor has died." "Oh, died, deceased, expired. Maybe your motor's just tired." The creature replied, walking over to it. He poked around it for a few minutes, then looked over at the others. "I know now what shall be done!" It said happily, "All it needs is chewing gum!" "Chewing gum?" The Monkees and Fred repeated. The creature pulled a piece of gum out of its mouth, stuck it to a loose gear and pushed a button. To everyone's surprise, the motor started right away!" "Hey, you fixed it!" Fred said. "Of course." The creature said smugly, "I am a genius, you know." "What's your name?" Micky asked. The creature pulled out a card from a pocket in its fur and handed it to him. Micky read the card out loud. "Jeremy Boob, writer, painter, mechanic." "At your service." Jeremy smiled, "Now I must go, I must start on my second masterpiece." "Wait, why don't you come with us?" Peter asked. "There doesn't seem to be a lot for you to do here." "Yeah, you seem to be in the middle of nowhere here." Davy added. "Aren't you lonely?" Mike asked. "Well..." Jeremy said, for the first time a frown appearing on his face, "It can be a drag talking to yourself after awhile. So yes, I will come." "Yeah, that's great!" Fred said, "We're on our way to Pepperland to free it from the Blue Meanies." "I have heard of them." Jeremy said, shaking his head, "They hate music and love and all nice things." He shivered. "So I will help you." To Be Continued... Laura, I'm not sure of Jeremy's full name. I'll have to watch YS and when I find it out, I'll put it in when I post this on my site. Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#6	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/20/06 11:22 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great going Lisa BTW,Jeremey's name is Jeremy Hilary Boob Phd Anyway, on with the story... The Monkees, Fred and Jeremy climbed aboard the sub. "So, I guess the next stop is the sea of nothing,"said Peter. Jeremy laughed and said,"Why, this is the sea of nothing, which explains why there's well nothing here." "Well, now that will make the rest of our journey seem ship shape," said Fred, taking the wheel. "I like the way it is submarine shape," said Peter. And once again the ship took off, when suddenly, the sub began to stall out again. "Now what?"Micky asked. "Can't be the motor again?"Davy asked. "Sounds like the propelers in the back aren't working," said Mike. Just like when the engine gave out, the sub landed with a loud thud. The Monkees and Jeremy got out to incept the propelers, while Fred stayed on board the sub. "What do you guys think we shoud do?"Davy asked. "Nothing another piece of chewing gum won't do the trick," said Jeremy, taking out another piece of gum. He chewed for a few moments, then placed it on the back of one of the propelers. "Some gum, a turn of the screw and all is good as new." The method worked, unfortuntly it worked too well, for at that moment the sub started up again, with only Fred on board, and The Monkees and Jeremy still outside. "Hey whoa, I can't stop this thing!"Fred cried from inside the sub, which took off. "H is for hurry! E is for ergent! L is for love meeeeeeeee! "P is for good-bye," said Mike, as the sub took off into the sky. "I thought good-bye started with a B," said Peter. "It does Peter, but, oh never mind," said Davy shaking his head. Micky looked around where they were all standing and asked,"Where exactly are we?" The guys and Jeremy looked around as well. All they could see where statues and head busts everywhere. "This must be the Foothills of the headlands,"said Mike. "How do we get out of here?"Davy asked. "Ask for help,"Peter answered. "Peter, they're all statues." "It's worth of try." The guys and Jeremy then appoarched the stautes. "Uh, excuse us," said Mike. "Can you tell us how to get to Pepperland?"Micky asked. The statues the each raised an arm and pointed in the right way direction. "Thank you." The guys and Jeremy then began to walk in the direction that the staues pointed at. "Gee, look at all this dust," said Peter, looking down at the ground. "Why, this isn't a dust, said Jeremy, collecting the dust, this is a seasoning, a spice a codemient." "He's right you know, said Davy, It's a type of pepper." "It is pepper," said Mike. The Monkees then beagn to sneeze Just then, some head busts sneezed, causing Jeremy and the Monkees to float up in the air, travel through a pipe, and ended up in another strange place. What will happen next? Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#7	[-]
Posts: 1316 (02/21/06 2:45 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Ahh...thanks, hun! Let me see...I want to change the scene a bit...I hope this doesn't mess you up...if it does, I'll change it. Back at Pepperland, the head Blue Meanie, a large creature with blue skin and large black ears, stood on a hill overlooking the once-green land. "Ahh, Max." The Blue Meanie said with satisfaction, to his smallere underling, "All is well. Not a bird singing, not a flower growing." "Yes, boss." Max said, nodding his head. "WHAT?" The Blue Meanie shouted, knocking Max down, "What did you say?" "I meant NO boss." Max said, climbing to his feet. "That's better." The head blue meanie said, turning back to the ruined landscape. "No more music, singing or playing either. Everyone has been turned to stone." "No boss." Max replied, shaking, "I really mean no too." The Blue Meanie turned to him. "What do you mean?" He growled, his eyes growing red. "We cannot locate the one called Fred, boss." Max said. "And his Yellow Submarine is gone from the pyramid." "AHHH!" The Blue Meanie screamed, "We need that submarine if we want to conquer other lands!" He knocked Max down again. "Don't just lie there, gather up some of the troops and have them search the surrounding seas. We must find that sub!" "Yes, I mean no, boss." Max said, running away. The head Blue Meanie walked over to the Glove waiting nearby. He petted it gently. "And if when find that sub, you know what to do with any occupants, don't you my little glovie?" The Glove gave a deep, evil laugh. Not too far away, the Monkees and Jeremy were exploring the sea of Holes. They would enter one hole and come out in another hole in a different location. "We'll never get anywhere until we find the right hole to take us to Pepperland." Mike complained. "I'm working on an equation to compute which holes end where and what sequence to use them." Jeremy replied, scribling furiously on a writing tablet. Meanwhile, some of the blue meanies heard the guys and Jeremy talking. One of them saw Jeremy's foot dangle from the end of the tube and gave a yank. Jeremy was pulled through and the blue meanies dragged him away. "Where's Jeremy?" Peter asked, looking around. "Hey Jeremy!" Davy yelled. "Jeremy!" Micky yelled too, but there was no answer anywhere. "Just great." Mike said sourly, "We're stuck in the sea of holes with no idea how to get to Pepperland." To Be Continued... I hope this is ok, Laura. If not, I'll change it. Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#8	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/21/06 11:12 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks Lisa You've saved me a bit of wrtiting time As we left off.... The Monkees countinued to search arounf for the hole that would take them to the sea of green. Peter was in the middle of looking, when he picked up on of the holes, folded it up and placed it in his pocket. "Well, so far no sign of Jeremey," said Micky. "Or a way to get to the sea of green," said Mike. "I wish we had a map or something that could help us," said Davy. "The only thing I have in my pocket is a hole," said Peter. Just then, he spotted a red dot. "I wonder what this does." Peter stepped on the dot, and the scen changed. The guys were no longer in the sea of holes, but somewhere else. "Pepperland," said the Monkees at the same time as they looked around where they were standing. "I gotta hand it to you Peter, you actaully did something that amazed us on this trip," said Mike. "Thank you,"Peter said with a beam. He then to noticed of something, which turned out to be a pile of green apples. "Hey, apples." "You know, I'm feeling a bit hungry," said Davy. "Same here," said Micky. "Let's get some then," said Mike. As the guys reached for the apples, Peter spotted something. "I think there's somebody under here,"he said. The guys then throw the apples off whatever was under there. It turned out to be a statue of an older looking man. Suddenly, a shadow was cast over the guys, It turned out to be the submarine as it came in for a landing. The sub landed back on the pryamid and Fred climbed out. "Fred!"the Monkees called out altogether. "I'm glad to see you boys made it here safely, said Fred, greeting the guys, By the way, what happened to your friend Jeremy?" "We lost him in the sea of holes,"Peter answered. "We did find something though," said Davy,pointing to the statue. "Why that's out lord mayor," said Fred. "Who?" "Our lord mayor, head of Pepperland. The blue meanies must had done this to him." Lisa, I may write the last part after your turn, but I'm not sure Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#9	[-]
Posts: 1316 (02/22/06 3:09 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	okey dokey! Fred and the Monkees quickly removed the rest of the apples away from the Lord Mayor, but he was still stone-like. "Oh my!" Fred exclaimed, "He was hit with too many apples!" "Wait, didn't you bring us here to help get rid of the Blue Meanies?" Mike asked. "Yes, of course." Fred replied. "Then maybe a song could help him." Mike smiled. The guys went to get their instuments and began to play while Micky sang: "Here we come, walking down the street, getting the funniest looks from everyone we meet!" "Hey hey, we're the Monkees!" Mike, Peter and Davy joined in. "And people say we Monkey around. We're too busy singing to put anybody down." As the Monkees sang, the color came back into the face of he Lord Mayor. Soon, he was sitting up and staring in amazement at everyone. "Fred, you made it back!" The Lord Mayor exclaimed as Fred helped him stand up. "Yes sir." Fred replied, "And I brought help. These are the Monkees. They're musicians and they've agreed to help us drive the Blue Meanies away." "I'm glad to meet you boys..." The Lord Mayor began to say, when he was interrupted by shouts from the bottom of the pyramid. Looking down, they could see several blue meanies climbing up after them! "We've been spotted!" Davy exclaimed. "What do we do?" "Easy. Run!" Micky yelled. Fred, the Lord Mayor and the Monkees quickly ran down the opposite side of the pyramid from where the Blue Meanies were coming up. "Do you have the keys?" The Lord Mayor asked Fred. Fred pulled a key out of his pocket. "They won't be able to use the Yellow Submarine any time soon." He replied. Everyone got to the bottom of the pyramid and began to run off into the hills. Soon, there were several meanies on thier trail. They had four-headed dogs with them, sniffing out their scent. To Be Continued... Hope this is ok. Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#10	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/22/06 11:14 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great going Lisa Here's what I got.... "What do we do now?"Peter asked. Mike though for a minute or two and said,"Mayor, does Pepperland have a town hall?" "Yes, why do you ask?"said the mayor. "You and Fred hid out there, while the guys and I take a look around." "Capital plan," said Fred. "Why can't we all hide out at town hall, and let someone else do the looking around?"Micky asked. "Because we're the only ones here who are not made out of stone," said Davy. The Monkees helped Fred and the mayor jump quickly from bush to bush and from tree to tree, so they won't get spotted by the blue meanies. "Do you think those meanies have Jeremy?"Peter asked. "Peter, we got to help the mayor and the town, then we'll look for Jeremy," said Mike. Luckily, they made it safe to town hall. "Ok, we made it. Fred, you and the mayor get inside. Fred and the mayor did just that. "Now, to see what we can do to help the town," said Davy. And the guys took off. More to come.... Mickys411 (Laura)
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#11	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/23/06 11:12 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Here's some more.... The guys countiune to run, when Mike suddenly stopped, causing the other Monkees to crash into him and they all ened up falling to the ground. "Hey, why did we stop?"Davy asked. "I just thought of something," said Mike. "What's that?"Peter asked. "Well, we're going to be easily spotted by the blue meanies, since we're not blue or statue form. So I think we have to blend in the crowd somehow." "How?"Davy asked. Micky spotted some town's people who were blue and still and said,"I think we have a way." The guys then each hid behind a person, carefully picked them up, and began to "walk" with them. Luckily for the guys the sun was setting, and though they would be able to pass by the blue meanies. As the guys pass through Pepperland, they saw some meanies coming their way. The stopped moving, once they saw the meanies getting closer. The guys noticed the meanies carrying something. "We'd better get these music instruments out of here," said one meanie. "Yeah, his blueness will have us for sure, if he sees any form of music around," said the other meanie. The guys saw that the instruments the meanies were hauling away were their own. "Hey! they got our instruments!" Peter nearly shouted. "Shhh!"went Davy,Micky and Mike. The Monkees carefully poked their heads from behind the people and saw that the meanies took the instruments up a hill and locked them up in a gazbo. To be countinued.... Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#12	[-]
Posts: 1316 (02/24/06 12:38 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	dramatic music in the background Uh oh! This doesn't look good! I think I know what's gonna happen next! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#13	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/24/06 11:38 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	As we left off.... The guys dashed in some near by bushes, so the meanies won't see them, as the blue creatures locked up the gazbo and went back down the hill. By the time they left, the sun had just about fully setted. The Monkees poked their heads to see that the blue meanies were stting up camp for the night. They hid back in the bushes. "Now what do we do?"Davy asked. "Wait till it's full dark, I got a plan," said Mike. Sure enough, the guys waited till it got completely dark out, and they stepped out of the bush carefully. The guys saw to see that the blue meanies were fast alseep. "What happens next?"Peter asked. "Wait and see, said Mike, who then took out his pocket knife and said to Micky,Do you still have your pocket knife?" "Yeah, said Micky, taking his knife out of his pocket, But what do you have in mind?" "You'll see," said Mike. He then crept over to a meanie. who was fast a sleep and carefully cut some of it's fur off. The other Monkees stood there in shock, for not only what Mike did, but that the meanie didn't wak up either. "Micky, cut some fur off of that one," Mike said pointing to another meanie. Micky did just that. Mike and Micky cut some more fur off a few more meanies, till Mike said,"Ok, I think we have enough." "What do we do with all this fur?"Davy asked. "Just do what I do," said Mike, who then put some of the blue fur on his head, wrists, ankels, and head. Peter,Micky and Davy did just that. "What do you guys think?"Mike asked. "I look like a poodle," said Micky. "I just look silly," said Davy. "Same here," said Peter. "I know, but I hope this plan works," said Mike. He then crept up to a meanie, who was sleeping. It was one of the meanies who locked up the guy's instruments. "Excuse me,"Mike whispered to the meanies. "Yes," asked the meanie, who was half awakw, half asleep. "Do you think I can get the key to the gazbo, I think I left something in there." The meanie lifted his pillow, grabbed a key that was under there and haned it to Mike. "Thanks," said Mike. "You're welcome," said the meanie going back to sleep. Mike went back to the other Monkees and said,"I got the key." "Groovy," said Micky. The guys then headed to the gazbo. "Tip toe, through the meanies,"Peter sang. "Shhh!"went Mike,Micky and Davy. The guys were almost there, when they were spotted by a search light. It turned out that the light was coming from a meanie, who was keeping watch. The meanie saw through the guys disguses right away. "Fakers!"the meanie shouted. What will happen next? Wait and see Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#14	[-]
Posts: 1316 (02/25/06 1:54 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Clever, Laura, very clever! Uh oh, the guys are in trouble! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#15	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/25/06 11:51 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks Lisa I still got some more to go... As soon as they saw the bright light flashing on them, The Monkees ran faster up to the gazbo. When they reached the top, Mike began to unlock the gazbo and just as he opened the door, the other Monkees pushed through to get in and hide from the meanie guard, causing all of them to fall. Just as Mike was about to close the door, Peter threw a set of bagpipes out that landed on his head. Being against all music, the meanie guard chased after the bagpipes. Surprisingly, through out the whole incident, the meanies countinued to sleep peacefully. "You know, I think we better stay here for the night," said Davy. "Good idea," said Micky. The guys made camp in the gazbo. They would decide what to do early the next day. The next morning,the sun shone brightly through the gazbo. "Ok fellas, said Mike, Grab what you can and let's get going." "What about all our instruments?"Peter asked. "We can't carry all of them down," said Davy. "Yeah, what if we wake the meanies or they see us," said Micky. Mike took his guitar,while Peter grabbed his bass,Davy collected his tamberine, and Micky picked up one of the tom-toms from his drum set and sticks. Mike opened the door and to his and the other Monkees surprise they saw the meanies were still asleep. The guys then carefully walked down the hill, trying not to wake the meanies. All was fine, until they reached the bottom, when Peter stepped on the set of bagpipes, causing the guard and the rest of the meanies to wake up. One meanies souned an alarm, and the Monkees dashed off into the woods. What will happen next? Stay tune Mickys411 (Laura)
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#16	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/26/06 11:36 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Here comes some more... The guys ran as fast as they could to escape from the blue meanies. They coutinued running, till they reached the middle of the woods, where they stopped to catch their breath. The Monkees looked behind to see if the meanies were still after them, but none were to be found. "That was a close one," said Davy. "Do see any meanies?"asked Mike. "No," said Peter. "None that I can see," said Micky. "I did see something else though," said Davy. "What's that?" Davy pointed to a tree that was full of green apples. "I don't know, esepcially since everything's turned blue," said Mike. "Come on, everything looks good when you're hungry," said Micky. The guys walked up to the tree to get some apples. But since the apples were so high up, the guys had to make a human ladder to reach. Mike stood on the bottom, Peter then climbed onto Mike's shoulders,Micky then got on Peter's shoulders, and Davy got on Micky's shoulders, then reached for an apple that was big enough for the four of them to share. Just then, the guys heard some voices. They looked over to see a meanie was leading a group of bonkers who were over 10 feet tall, and carrying the same green apples that were on the trees and that they found the mayor under when the arrived in Pepperland. Mike, who still had all the guys on eachothers shoulders began to walk and said," Come on, I got a plan. The Monkees then go onto line with the bonkers. "Men, march on!"The meanie ordered. And the bonkers began to march. "One,two,three,four!"the bonkes shouted. "Five," whispered Davy,as he hit the bonker in front of him on the head with the apple. "One,two,three,four,"the bonkers and the Monkees said. Davy then hit another bonker. "One,two,three." "Three?" the meanie asked. "Two," said Davy. "Two?" Davy then hit the last bonker. "One," he said. "One?"said the meanie. The meanie then got a closer look at the Monkees. "Funny, you don't look blueish,"he said. Mike began to walk backwards, then he and the other Monkees fell to the ground. Their apple meanwhile, landed on the meanie's head knocking him out cold. "Let's split!"Micky yelled as he and the other Monkees took off again. I hope to finish the end tommorrow Mickys411 (Laura)
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (Fanfic)	#17	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/27/06 11:11 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Here's more of our tale The guys ran, until they came up to several forks in the woods. "Guys, I think it's time we spilt up," said Mike. Peter gasped and shouted,"Mike! We can't split up! We're a group!" Davy tried to calm him down. "Peter, I think what Mike means we should split up in four seprate directions, that way the meanies won't find us,"he said. "I think that's a good idea," said Micky. So the Monkees each to a different path in the woods. Davy took the north path, and began to walk down it. Just then, he heard growling and footsteps coming towards him. Davy turned to see that a four-headed blue dog was heading his way. As soon as the dog spotted him, it moved faster, ended uo stop right in front of Davy. "Nice dog, good boy, girl whatever you are,"Davy said to the dog. He then reached for a flower off a bush and handed it to the dog. Each dog head sniffed it, and enjoyed by the flowers plesant scent. Just then, the flowers squirted water on them. Davy countinued down the path, while the dog, who was still blinded a bit by the water, took the opposite way. Mike went the east way, and wondered around hopefully meeting the guys along the way and get back to Pepperland. Suddenly, he stopped to see a trap consiting of a net tied to a tree branch. He walked around the trap, to avoid getting caught. Just then, Mike heard footsteps appoarching. That gave Mike a quick plan. He covered the trap with leaves, then he hid in some bushes. Sure enough, two meanies were walking along the path and ended up begin caught in the net. Mike then jumped out of the bushes and took off. The meanies tried to get down to chase him, but they were stuck in the net and struggled hard to break free. Micky choose the west direction, and said,"I hope those meanies don't stop me, since I'm not wearing any blue." Just then, he heard something or someone coming up behind him. He looked to see some blue meanies were indeed heading his way. "I spoke too soon," said Micky. He then spotted some blue colored bushes and came up with a quick idea. Micky then used his pocket knife to cut some of the bush off, then took two broken off tree branches and placed them in his curly hair, making himself to look like a meanie, or at least close to one. The meanies the appoarched the "meanie" and asked,"Did you see anybody who doesn't look blueish?" "He went back the other way," said Micky, talking in a deep voice and pointing back the other way. "Thanks," said the meanies, heading back the way they came from. Micky then removed his costume and took off. Peter headed south way, and was walking along, when all of a sudden, he heard a muffle. At first he was nervous, but walked up further to take a closer look. He then spotted a very famliar person. Sure enough, tied to a tree and a kerchief covering his mouth, was Jeremey, who was under the eye of two meanies, who were keeping look out. "Jeremy, is that you?"Peter asked, as he appoarched the tree, and took the gag off his friend. "Could it be me? said Jeremy, Why don't you asked the guards, for when I was captured, they took all my cards." "Shh, don't worry, I'll get you down." Peter then untied Jeremy and helped him down. "Thank you Peter, said Jeremy. Unfortuly, the guards saw everything that just happened. The guards appoarched them when Jeremy stepped forward and said,"Is it a fight you want, uh? "I'll give you a punch that will feel like a paper cut. A left to the nose and a right to the gut." Jeremy began to give boxing moves but ended up up hitting his head on the tree. As the guards laughed at Jeremy, they didn't know that he hit the tree hard enough for two apples to fall and hit the guards, knocking them out cold. "That was a close, said Peter, And thanks for saving me Jeremy. "Not a problem, said Jeremy, Now let's get out here." With the help of a map and a compass, Jeremy helped Peter get out of the woods. When they reached the end, they got a wonderful surprise to see that the other Monkees were waiting for them. I'll have the end tommorrow (I hope) Mickys411 (Laura)
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#18	[-]
Posts: 2229 (02/28/06 11:19 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	"There you are Peter," said Davy. "I would had gotton really lost if I didn't find Jeremy," said Peter. "Groovy, where did you find him?"Micky asked. "In the woods." Mike looked over the woods and said,"Well, so far so good, meaning no sign of meanies. So let's get moving to find Fred and the mayor." So, the guys and Jeremy scrambled across the woods to get back to the town of Pepperland. Luckily for them, not only did they find the town hall with no problems, with the help of Jeremy's map and compass but didn't have any run-ins with blue meanies. The Monkees knocked on the door of the town hall, and Fred answered it. "We got our instruments," said Davy. "Brillant," said Fred. "Where do we set up?"Micky asked. "Right here will be perfect." The guys then set up right in front of the town hall. Little did they know, as the guys were setting up, the blue meanies were preparing for another attack. "This will dampen their concert," laughed the head meaine. "No, you're right your blueiness," said Max. The guys got their instruments ready and began to play. "Oh the beat of ten, said Mike, One two three four five six..." "Can't we make it three?"Peter asked. "Ok, on the beat of three, one two three." Despite missing some of parts of their instruments, the Monkees sounded pretty good as they started to play. "The local rock group down the street is trying hard to learn their song,"Micky sang. Suddenly, the people of Pepperland beagn to change. From looking depressed and blue colored, to back to sking tones and looking happy. The sound of hearing music bought joy to their faces. "It's working," said Fred. "By jove, you're right," said the mayor. The meanies meanwhile, didn't like the sound of the music on bit. They covered their ears and shouted. When the concert ended, the crowd chreeed for the Monkees. Though the guys took bows, the moods changed when Mike spotted some blue meanies. "This gives me an idea," said Mike. "What's that?"Davy asked. "I still got the key for the gazbo." "So?"Peter asked. "Well, the other instruments are in there, said Mike, So I figured if we give the town's people insturments, we can scare the meanies away." "That's a good idea," said Micky. The guys then dashed to the gazbo, and Mike unlocked. The Monkees then began handing out instruments to the crowd of people. "My violin!"said one woman. "My clarinet," a man called out. "My tuba!"shouted a small boy. "My triangle!" cried a younf girl. Once the instruments were handed out, the town began to play, and the Monkees joined them. This time around, instead of covering their ears, the meanies ranaway. "No! no you're charging the wrong way!"The head meanie shouted. Soon, the meanie army was gone, leaving only the head blue meanie and Max. The head meanie then feel to the ground and began to cry. Just then, Jeremy appoarched him. The head meanie stopped crying, looked up at Jeremy with an evil smile and said,"I think I will tear him up into little pieces and make him into a blue burger." He then picked up Jeremy. "Oh dear, some words of wisdom, before I'm destoryed," said Jeremy. I'll have it done tommorrow I promise Mickys411 (Laura)
Mickys411	Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#19	[-]
Posts: 2229 (03/01/06 11:32 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	At last, the end As always, many thanks to Lisa for the help of writing along Thank you Lisa And now, then end of our story.... Jeremy reached into his fur, and pulled out a book of poems. He cleared his throat and began to read,"A rise, a rise a rose." Jeremy pointed to the head meanies' nose and a pink colored rose began to grow on the tip of it. The head meanie then dropped Jeremy and screamed,"Speak your last piece." "Piece? asked Jeremy,"Piece, oh yes. Down your frown upside down to a smile, turn off what is sour, make like a flower and bloom." As Jeremy said his poem, he pointed to the head meanies' fur and more pink colored roses grew on him. The head meanie then let out another scream and ran away, with Max close behind him. "It's no longer a blue world Maaaaaaaaaax!" the head meanie cried. As the Monkees watched what happend, Peter said,"The first time we met that nowhere man, I knew he was a somebody." "You know Peter, what you said almost made sence," said Davy. "Thank you." "Well, looks like Pepper land is back to the way it should be," said Micky,looking around at the now colorful scenery. "What about them?"Peter asked pointing to the blue meanies. Mike looked at the head meanie and Max sitting sadly on the ground and said,"Excuse me, meanies, if you you'd change your ways, you'd would you care to join us?" "What do you think Max," the head meanie asked his assistant. "No," Max answered. "What?!" "I mean yes, you're newness." "Yes, I happen to like the sound of that word." "Oh yes, is a word of positives, a word that is simply marvolus," said Jeremy. "Yes, let us mix Max, said the head meanie, I never told anyone this, but my cousin is the blue bird of happniess." And so, peace was made with the blue meanies and the people of Pepperland declaring peace, soon after everyone, including Jeremy and the Monkees celebrate with a big party that had lots of music palying across the land. All of sudden, there was a nosie that sounded like an alarm clock. Peter woke up and let out a yawn. "Man, what a groovy dream," he said. During breakfast, Peter told the guys of his amazing dream. "And we went through a sea when we changed into kids then old men, and I got lost in a sea with monsters. "You know, I actually had that dream to," said Davy. "Hey so did I," said Micky. "Me to," said Mike. After breakfast, the guys decided to practice, when they reached the bandstand, they found a note by the drum set. Mike picked up the note and read it. "What does it say" asked Davy. Mike showed the note to the guys, it only said one word, Yes. "Hey,do you guys suppose?"asked Micky. "Maybe," said Peter. The Monkees though for a minute, then said,Naw." Though, what happened to the guys might not had been ture, it was still a great dream. The End What do you guys think? Mickys411 (Laura)
Larrysgirl	Re: Yellow Submarine (fanfic)	#20	[-]
Posts: 1316 (03/01/06 11:57 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	This was really a nice story, Laura! Great job, and thank you for letting me help out! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair! and now The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair too!