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Larrysgirl	The Invisible Monkee (fanfic)	Lead	[-]
Posts: 1316 (06/28/05 12:46 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Ok, everybody! Sit back and enjoy another story! Laura, Marm or anybody else can join in! Synopsis: Micky fools around with his chemisty set...need I say more? "Micky!" "Not now Mike, I'm busy!" He replied. "You should be busy up here rehearsing with us!" Mike said sternly. "Yeah, we have a big gig coming up soon." Peter added. "I almost have my formula perfected." Micky said as he slowly added a red liquid to a blue one in a beaker. "You said that before." Davy said, walking over to where Micky kept his chemisty set. "You never did tell us what you're trying to invent anyway." "Something to make short people tall." Micky said with a big smile. "Oh I thought it was something to help you improve your drumming." Davy shot back. "My drumming is fine!" Micky retorted. "Would you mind proving it?" Mike asked, indicating the drumkit. Reluctantly, Micky put the beaker down and went behind his drumkit. "Thank you." Mike said with a smile, "Now let's start." The guys started to play 'Last Train to Clarksville'. Micky's drumming was ok, but his mind was on his latest invention. "Micky!" Mike shouted at him. "Huh, what?" Micky asked. "You can stop playing now. The song is over." Mike said. Micky smiled sheepishly and stopped playing. "Man this latest invention sure has you distracted." Peter said, "What's it all about?" "I'm trying to invent something a typist can use to cover up any mistakes." Micky replied. "An eraser?" Davy asked. "No, a white liquid that can be applied to paper to hide an error and then be typed over again." "That might be useful." Peter said, "The typist can keep on going instead of starting over again." "Sort of like a liquid paper." Mike added. "Hey, that's a good name for it Mike!" Micky said, "The problem is that the stuff I'm using keeps cancelling each other out. Instead of turning white like paper...it becomes clear, almost invisible." "That's not good." Davy commented. "I'm sure you'll get it right, Micky." Mike said, "But lets keep playing. We really need this gig coming up." "We always need a gig." Davy said. The others chuckled and went back to rehearsing. Later that evening, Micky was back working at his test tubes while the others watched TV. "Take a break, Micky." Peter said, "You can't keep standing there all night." "I almost have it perfected." Micky said. "You said that before." Davy replied. "Let him be." Mike to Davy, "At least we know where he's at at all times." "Ha ha." Micky smirked. A while later, Mike noticed the time and suggested they all go to bed. "You three go up." Micky said, "I'll be up soon." "No, you're coming to bed now, Micky." Mike told him. "Give it a rest for tonight. You'll get it soon." "But Mike..." Micky pleaded. But Micky was picked up by his band mates and carried upstairs to his bedroom. Later that night, Micky tossed and turned in bed, wondering what he was doing wrong. Why wasn't his formula working? As he lay there, he thought over all the different chemicals he had used and wondered if any of them would work if used with another. Then suddenly he realized what he must've been doing wrong! Throwing off his covers, Micky tiptoed downstairs and over to his chemisty set. Putting on a small lamp, he began to pour chemicals into a large beaker. He looked at a small tube of amber colored liquid. "Yes, this is the one." He smiled. Micky poured it in with the other chemicals...and suddenly the contents of the beaker began to foam up and bubble. Startled, Micky put the beaker down and looked at what was happening. Suddenly, the beaker exploded, splashing Micky with the contents! Micky was covered with the stuff! Oddly, he didn't feel any pain, just a tingling sensation all over his body. The lights came on in the bedrooms, and the other Monkees came racing out of their rooms. "What's going on?" Davy yelled. "It's just me, Davy." Micky said, "One of my experiments blew up in my face." Peter turned on the light. He saw the chemistry set and the broken test tube, but no Micky! "Where are you, Micky?" He asked. "Right here, Peter." Micky said, "I'm fine." "Where here, Micky." Peter said, "I can't see you." "I'm standing right in front of you, Peter!" Micky said, getting annoyed. "Quit playing, Micky." Davy said, "Come out from hiding." "Are you two crazy?" Micky asked. "I'm standing in front of you both?" "What's going on?" Mike said as he came downstairs. "Micky was fooling around with his chemisty set and had an accident." Davy said, "Now he's hiding from us." "No I'm not!" Micky shouted, "I'm right here!" "Micky, get over here." Mike said sternly. Micky was really getting scared now. Why couldn't his friends see him? He looked at his hands...and didn't see them! He ran over to a mirror on the wall...and couldn't see himself! "Guys...I'm invisible." He said. To Be Continued.... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Marmadas	Re: The Invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#1	[-]
Posts: 418 (06/28/05 3:48 PM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Awesome job!! this is gonna be a great story!! I love micky and his chemistry set.... keep up the good work!! Oh, and I'm just on my way to post Through the looking glass again.... see you there! Marmadas Keep spreading the Monkeelove! Check out my Groovy Monkees Website!!!
Mickys411	The Invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#2	[-]
Posts: 2229 (06/28/05 9:09 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great start Lisa BTW, that was cleaver nringing up the part about whiteout Let's see what I can come up with... "I'm invisible, how is this possible?" asked Micky, who was now really scared. "Maybe if you didn't play around with that stupid chemistry set you won't be in this mess," said Davy. "I hate to say it, but I think Davy's right," said Peter. "Sure Peter, take Davy's side," said Micky. "I'm not taking sides," said Peter. "Guys, this is not about taking sides, it's about," said Mike, who got inturupted by the others. "I thought you were gonna stop with experiments after you turned Babbit into a baby," said Davy. "I didn't make him drink that stuff," said Micky. "Quiet!" yelled Mike. Everyone stopped talking. "Now, Mike countuinuded, "We have to do something to make Micky visible again." "How?" Davy asked. "Maybe this stuff washes off," said Peter. He got a pitcher from the kitchen cupboard, filled it with some water, and went back to the guys. "Micky, where are you?" Peter asked. "I'm sitting on the couch," Micky answered. Peter appoarched the couch and splashed water on it. "Well, that didn't do the trick, said Micky, Not only am I still invisible, but I'm also wet. What will happen next? Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
Larrysgirl	Re: The Invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#3	[-]
Posts: 1316 (06/29/05 12:11 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks, Marm! Glad your story is up again! Great job, Laura! As we go along... Micky stood up and walked over to the kitchen to grab a towel to dry off. While walking there, Mike bumped into him while walking in another direction. "Sorry, Micky." Mike said. "It's alright." Micky replied as he took a towel and dried himself off. Even though he rubbed thoroughly, he still remained invisible to everyone. "Maybe you should put a cloth or some clothing on so we can at least know where you are." Davy suggested. "Good idea, Davy." Micky replied, then walked up to his room. In a few minutes, he came back down wearing a robe. The other Monkees were a little spooked seeing a bathrobe move around the pad by itself. "Now we gotta get you back to normal, Micky." Mike said, "Do you know what you used to get that way?" "Yeah, I mixed anacanapanasan with whatziz and it blew up and soaked me." Micky replied. "Do you know of any antidote?" Davy asked. "No, I don't." Micky replied. "I was still trying to find the right formula." "If water didn't work," Peter chimed in, "Let's try other things." So the guys used soap and water, rubbing alcohol, lemon juice and other stuff on Micky's skin...but Micky was still invisible. Micky fixed up a few potions and poured them on himself, but had no luck at all. "It must've really soaked me," Micky said sadly, "Down to the molecular level." "Let's go back to sleep." Mike said, "Maybe we can think up something in the morning." The others, including Micky, agreed and went back to bed. Micky still couldn't sleep, wondering what he could do to get back to normal. The next morning, Mike got up and went over to Micky's bed. "Time to get up, Mick." He said. "I'm already up, Mike." Micky said from behind him. Mike jumped a foot in the air and turned around. "Don't do that!" Mike exclaimed at the empty air in front of him. "Don't do what, Mike?" Micky said, now standing behind Mike. "Micky..." Mike warned. "Ok, Mike." Micky said with a chuckle, "I'll put on some clothes so you can see me." Micky pulled on a pair of pants and a shirt. "There. Happy?" Micky asked. "Yeah, let's have breakfast." Breakfast was an odd affair, what with a knife and fork seemingly moving on their own. Though they knew Micky was there, it was a little unsettling to see stuff move without seeing anyone move it. After breakfast, the Monkee sat down in the living room to discuss what to do with Micky. "I'm really sorry about this guys." Micky said, "I had no idea this would happen." "You gotta be careful, Micky." Davy said, "Chemicals are nothing to fool around with." "I thought I was careful." Micky said quietly. "How can we help Micky?" Peter said to the others. It was quiet for a long time in the pad. Finally, Mike spoke up. "I guess it's time for us to visit our friendly neighborhood scientist." He said. 'Friendly' neighborhood scientist? Maybe... To Be Continued.... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Marmadas	Re: The Invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#4	[-]
Posts: 418 (06/29/05 9:05 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	great job!! this is turning out really good!! can't wait for more! Marmadas Keep spreading the Monkeelove! Check out my Groovy Monkees Website!!!
tysonwolf	Re: The Invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#5	[-]
Posts: 4909 (06/29/05 8:42 PM) Queen of the Clones CoCo Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I love it! Great job, Lisa, Laura!
Mickys411	The invisinble Monkee (fanfic)	#6	[-]
Posts: 2229 (06/29/05 8:46 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great Job Lisa I hope you don't mind me writing this part "Before we go visit this scienctist, there's something I always wanted to do," said Micky. "What's that?" asked Davy. "Follow me." Micky placed a baseball cap on, so the guys will see him better and what he was planning on doing. Mike, Peter and Davy followed their friend outside to the house next door, which was Babbit's house. He saw through the window that Mr.Babbit was slepping on his couch. Micky giggled and took the baseball cap off. "Micky, what are you doing?" asked Mike. "Are you going to do what we think you're going to do?" asked Davy. "Are you going to do what we think you're going to do, even though I don't really know what you're going to do?" asked Peter. The guys gave Peter an odd look for what he just said and shook their heads. Micky then turned the doorknob and to his surprise, it was unlocked. He opened the door and let himself in. Micky appoarched Babbit who was still sound asleep on the couch. Micky then cleared his throat and began to make noises. "OOOOHHHHH!!! OOOOOOOHHHH!" he went. Babbit woke up right away. "What was that?" asked Babbit, who was more angry than scared since someone or something disturbed him while trying to take a nap. "Greeting Babbit," said a voice, who was really Micky, talking in a spooky sounding voice. "Who said that?" "Peek-a-boo, I see you." "What do you want?" "I want you to be nice to those musican boys who live next door, especially that honest looking handsome faced curly headed one. And that they don't have to pay rent for a month." "And if I r..rr..refuse," asked Babbit, who was now being to be scared. "Then I shall have to stay here and haunt yooooouu!" said Micky, still sounding spooky. Sorry, I just can't help myself Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
Larrysgirl	Re: The invisinble Monkee (fanfic)	#7	[-]
Posts: 1316 (06/30/05 12:28 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks, Marm and Courtney! Laura, that was absolutely hilarious! Babbit was now terrified. "No, no don't do that!" He shouted. Micky picked up the blanket that was lying across Babbit's legs and began to wave it around the room. "Booooo!" Micky said spookily. "Ok! I'll be nice to the Monkees, they won't have to pay rent for two months!" Babbit shouted. Outside, the other three Monkees could hardly hold in their laughter. "Very well. But I'll be watching!" Micky said, then threw the blanket over Babbit's head. As Babbit fumbled with the blanket, Micky quickly exited the house. The four Monkees quickly raced back to their house and managed to get inside before falling on the floor in hysterics. "Micky, that was terrific!" Davy said, gasping with laughter. Even Mike thought the whole thing was funny. "At least we'll get a two month reprieve." He giggled. "Or two months without paying rent." Peter said with a laugh. Finally the guys stopped laughing and picked themselves up off the floor. Mike walked over to the phone book and looked up the number to a research lab that was nearby. "Hmm." Mike said, "Here's a guy that might help you Micky. His name is Dr. Frank N. Stein. He does research on the human body." "Does he live far?" Micky asked. "No, just a few blocks away at 1313 Mockingbird Lane." Mike replied. "Well, let's go!" Micky said. "Not so fast, shotgun." Mike said, "Aren't you forgetting something?" Micky realized he didn't have anything on so he could be seen. "Oh, yeah, let me put on something." Micky went back upstairs and put on a hat, coat and a pair of slacks and shoes. "How's this?" Micky asked. At least we'll know where you are." Peter said. "Well, let's go." Mike said, "We gotta get Micky back to normal-or something close to that..." "Hey!" Micky said. "Just kidding Mick." Mike laughed as they left the pad. Mike drove over to 1313 Mockingbird lane. It was a quiet area of town, with a few old houses still standing. The house they wanted was an old wooden frame house that had seen better days. Making sure nobody was around, the Monkees got out of the car and walked up to the front door. The front door had a sign on it that read: Dr. Frank N. Stein Scientist Genius Really smart guy office hours by appointment "We don't have an appointment." Davy said. "I think we'll get one once he sees Micky." Peter said. "You mean doesn't see Micky." Davy replied. With a shrug, Mike knocked on the door. What will happen now? To Be Continued... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Mickys411	The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#8	[-]
Posts: 2229 (06/30/05 8:58 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks Lisa I'm glad you it Let's see what I can come up with... The guys didn't waited for someone to invite them in, for the door opened on it's own. "I guess that means we can come right in," said Mike. So the Monkees walked into the office. When the guys entered the building, they saw a young blone woman, seated at a desk, looking over some paperwork. She looked up as soon as the Monkees came in, due to a bell being attached to the door. "Good afternoon gentlemen" said the woman,Can I help you?" "Yes ma'am, I know we don't have an appointment, but we need to see Dr. Frank N. Stein," said Mike. "What seems to be the matter with your friend?" asked the woman. "He's invisible," said Peter. The woman gave the Monkees a strange look as if she didn't believe them. "You know, I think you better," Davy said to Micky. Micky nodded and took the coat off. The woman screamed and fainted. "I guess that means I can't ask her out on a date," said Davy. "Never mind about that," said Mike. "Yeah, what about Micky?" asked Peter. "Yeah, what about me?" Micky asked. Just then, a middle aged man popped his head out from behind a door. "What seems to be the comotion in here?" asked the man. "Excuse me sir, we're here to see Dr.Frank N. Stien," said Mike. "You talking to him." "You're Dr.Frank N. Stien?" asked Peter. "Yes young man, said the doctor, "What Can I do for you boys?" "Well you see doctor, our friend became invisible after a accident," said Davy. "Is your friend with you?" "That will be me sir," said Micky, who once again removed the coat. As he did it, the woman was getting up from fainting, but when she saw that there was noone under the coat once more, she fainted again. "I may be able to help you young man, come this way," said the doctor to Micky. Micky followed the doctor. Hopefully, I can write one more part tommorrow, before I go away Sat. Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
tysonwolf	Re: The invisinble Monkee (fanfic)	#9	[-]
Posts: 4909 (06/30/05 9:01 PM) Queen of the Clones CoCo Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great story! Can't wait for more! Laura, I loved your part with Micky scaring Mr. Babbit!
Larrysgirl	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#10	[-]
Posts: 1316 (07/01/05 12:23 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great job, Laura! Let's move on... "Can we come in too?" Mike asked Dr. Stein. "Sure, why not?" The doctor said with a smile and let the other three Monkees inside his lab. They all walked down a short hallway and it led into a medical lab. There were tables there on which sat several test tubes containing liquids of all colors. The Doc motioned for Micky to climb up on an exam table, which he did. Then he got everyone's names and when and where the accident happened. The doc looked at where Micky was supposed to be for several seconds before speaking. "I have to admit this is a first for me." Dr. Stein said. "To examine the effects of invisiblity on a human being." "It's new to me too, Doc." Micky said. "What did you splash on yourself?" Dr. Stein asked. "Anacanapanasan and Whatziz." Micky replied. "That's a very dangerous combination." The doctor told him. "You are lucky it didn't burn your skin off." Doctor Stein took a weird-looking magnifiying glass with red and blue lights on it and tried to look at Micky's skin. "Hmmm...still not able to see the structure of your skin." He mused. He took some blue dye and painted the back of Micky's hand. Then he looked at the skin again. "Ah, much better!" The doctor exclaimed. "It seems that whatever was splashed on your skin was absorbed by the pores all the way down to the subcutenaous level, totally changing its cell structure and making it invisible!" "We tried to wash it off." Peter said, "But nothing worked." "Washing only affects the upper dermal layer." The doc said, "You need something similar to what was splashed on his skin in the first place." "Like what?" Davy asked. "I'll need a skin sample to find out for sure." The doctor replied. "Skin sample?!" Micky shouted. "I'll only need a few flakes, Micky." Dr. Stein replied, "It won't hurt a bit." Micky looked dubious but let the doctor scrape a device across his forearm. The Doctor took the skin samples and placed them in a test tube filled with a red liquid. "Now what happens?" Mike asked. "When the skin is dissolved, it will change this liquid into a different color." The doctor replied. "When that happens, I'll put it into this machine," He pointed to what looked like an oven, "and find out the exact chemical structure of the invisibility formula!" "Then you can find an antidote?" Micky asked hopefully, "I mean it was fun scaring our landlord...but I'd like to get back to normal." "Oh, don't worry, young man." Dr. Stein said, "I'll find the antidote for you." And I'll be rich, the doctor thought to himself. In the outer office, Dr. Stein's secretary finally recovered enough from seeing or rather not seeing Micky and reached for the phone on her desk. Making sure the door to the doctor's lab was shut, she picked up the receiver and dialed a special number. After several rings, a man with a foreign accent answered. "Hello?" The man said. "Boris, this is Natasha." Natasha whispered, slipping into her true accent. "I think all this time working at the good doctor's office has finally paid off." "Speak quickly, this line might be bugged." Boris snapped. "He is examining a young man in his lab right now." Natasha said quietly. "So what?" Boris replied. "This young man is invisible!" Natasha said happily. "Invisible?!" Boris asked, unable to believe his ears. "Yes, I saw, er didn't see it with my own eyes!" Natasha answered. "Find out how this young man came to be invisble." Boris told his partner, "Try and find a formula. If not, we will grab this young man and find out for ourselves." "Yes, think of it, Boris!" Natasha said, "What our fearless leader could do with an invisible army!" "It would save a bundle on uniforms." Boris answered, "I will inform him on what has occured. Keep me posted." "I will, Boris. Goodbye." "Goodbye." Boris said. Natasha put down the receiver and began to plot how she could get Micky's invisibility formula. The plot thickens....looks like the doc and foreign spies are now after Micky! Take it away, Laura or whoever! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Marmadas	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#11	[-]
Posts: 418 (07/01/05 9:48 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I think I'll try a bit! Great job with Babbit, and great job with Boris and Natasha! Micky sat up on the table and watched what was happening. Dr. Stein gasped as the red liquid in the tube turned to a irridescent liquid that shone all the colors of the rainbow. "This is very extraordinary! I have never seen my red liquid turn this color before! No wonder I've never found the antidote for invisibleness!" 'Not that I've ever encountered it before,' he said to himself. Next, he took the liquid over to an enourmous machine, explaining as he did. "When I pour the liquid in here, the machine will calculate the exact chemical structure of the invisibility formula. It will then show it on that screen, there, along with possible formulas for antidotes." He poured the liquid into a funnel on top of the machine. It then spiraled down through multiple looping tubes and into the main machine. The machine made a loud whirring sound, then spewed the liquid, now back to its original red, into a waiting test tube, and listed a formula on the screen. "R6Yk45O67KLH10Bn2GsFe78" the doctor read. "I've never heard of some of those elements before," Mike questioned the machine's accuracy. "Almost no one has! In fact, some of them were just descovered by the great scientist Cedric Von Shnitzler!" The Doctor then realized a horrible fact, "Oh no! It doesn't list any possible antidotes. I'll have to experiment myself! This may take some time, so make yourselves at home." Will he find the antidote before Boris arrives?? What will happen next??? Marmadas Keep spreading the Monkeelove! Check out my Groovy Monkees Website!!!
Mickys411	The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#12	[-]
Posts: 2229 (07/01/05 8:51 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great Job Lisa and Marmadas Let's see what I can come up with... Dr. Frank N. Stien was mixing up different colored liquids, to see if he could come up with any possibilites for an antidote. "I think this oughta do it," he said. He poured some into a bottle, placed a squirt top on and shook it. "Are you still on the table young man?" the doctor asked Micky. "Yes I am," Micky answered. Dr.Frank sprayed the liquid and he and the other Monkees watch to see if anything was going to happen. The four just looked in surprise. "Did it work?" Micky asked. He noticed the guys and the doctor were laughing. "What's so funny?" "Look in the mirror mate,"said Davy with a laugh. Micky did just that and saw that he was visible, execpt he was rainbow colored, instead of his normal skin tone. "AAAHHH!" he screamed. "Let me try something else," said Dr. Frank N. Stien. Meanwhile, the other Monkees were trying to hold back on their laughter. Sadly, that's all I can come up with... Mickys411 Laura the glick grobanite
Larrysgirl	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#13	[-]
Posts: 1316 (07/02/05 12:52 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Marm and Laura, you guys were terrific! And away we go... Once again, Dr. Frank N. Stein went back to work on trying to find an antidote for Micky. He poured the liquid down into the machine again and put the clear liquid back into the bottle. "Let's see what happens now." He said. He splashed Micky with the contents and Micky became invisible once again. "Drat. At least I think I have the invisiblity formula right, but no antidote yet." The doctor said. "At least I don't look like a rainbow anymore." Micky said. A long time passed and the doc tried to find a formula that worked, but he was having no luck. Finally, he put down a beaker of fluid. "Tell you what, boys. I live in the top part of this house and I have some empty bedroooms. Why not stay the night while I work some more on the antidote?" "Well, I dunno doc..." Mike said. "Oh, c'mon Mike." Micky said, "I wanna be close by when he finds the right formula." "Ok, we'll stay." Mike said, and Peter and Davy agreed also. The doctor rang a bell and Natasha came into the lab. "Natasha, could you show these gentlemen upstairs to the bedroom while I continue working?" "Of course, Dr. Stein." She replied. "After that, you can go home too." "Thanks, doctor." Natasha smiled. "This way, please." The Monkees followed her out of the lab and up a flight of steps into Dr. Stein's private quarters. She then showed them to a room with bunk beds for them to sleep. "I hope you will be comfortable." The spy told them. "We'll be fine, luv." Davy said, "By the way, are you busy tomorrow night?" "Davy!" The others shouted. "It's ok, gentlemen." Natasha smiled, then looked at where Micky was standing, a coat indicating where he was. "I hope the doctor finds an antidote for you soon." She said. "Yeah, me too." Micky replied. "Goodnight." She smiled. "Goodnight Natasha!" The guys replied. Natasha shut the door and rolled her eyes. Quickly, she went downstairs and dialed Boris again. "Well?" He demanded. "The invisible one and his friends are staying over at the doctor's house tonight." Natasha said, quietly. "Is Dr. Stein having any luck?" Boris asked. "No, but he is working at it. Experience shows he will continue to work until he is successful." "Let's hope so." Boris replied, "I have told fearless leader and he wants the formula soon-or it is a trip to Siberia for us!" Natasha gulped. "We will get the formula or we'll kidnap the invisble one for him." She promised. "Very well. I trust you will be staying there too?" "I was told to go home, but I will sneak into the secret room and continue to spy." Natasha said. "Excellent!" Boris said, "Let me know if you need help. Goodbye." "Goodbye, Boris." Will the doctor be successful or will Boris and Natasha have to kidnap Micky? (hint hint) Wait and see! Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Marmadas	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#14	[-]
Posts: 418 (07/02/05 11:49 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Loved the rainbow, Laura!! Very psychadelic! The Monkees sat up in their room, unable to go to sleep. Suddenly the doctor burst the door open. "I think I found the cure!" he shreiked. "Hold out your arm, Micky." The drummer did so, and a silver liquid was poured over his hand. Nothing happened at first, but after a few minutes, Micky's hand appeared very faintly, and very see-through. "I'm see-through!" he cried. "This is not right at all!" "This is even worse!" Davy said, "Now you look like a disembodied ghost-hand!" "Hmmm... this will take more work than I thought. You guys should really get your sleep." "But how can we get to sleep if you keep barging in here?" Peter asked. "Good point," the doctor admitted, "Micky, have you got an invisible shirt on under that jacket?" "Yeah, why?" the drummer asked. "Well, take it off. I can test on the shirt, and call you if anything begins to work. It won't have the exact formula as will be needed on your skin, but at least I'll be able to get it close." Micky took off the jacket and began unbuttoning his shirt. "You better hurry, man," Mike said, "The whole disembodied hand thing is starting to creep me out!" "I will try extra hard." he grabbed the invisible shirt from the floating hand and rushed out of the room. After that the monkees turned off the light and eventually fell asleep. Natasha hung up the phone, then looked carefully around the room. Convinced that no one was watching, she opened a drawer in her desk and pushed a hidden button. A panel of the wall slid open and she crept inside. Once the panel slide back, the spy made her way to the far end of the secret room and peered through two eyeholes. These holes led into the Doctor's lab, and acted as the eyes of a painting of Albert Einstein. Natasha waited and waited while watching the doctor fail experiment after experiment. How doya like it?? Marmadas Keep spreading the Monkeelove! Check out my Groovy Monkees Website!!!
Larrysgirl	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#15	[-]
Posts: 1316 (07/02/05 10:57 PM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Like it? I love it, Marm! Can't add anything tonight to this, maybe tomorrow. Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Larrysgirl	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#16	[-]
Posts: 1316 (07/05/05 1:37 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Let's see if I can get my brain to work now... As time went on, Natasha was falling asleep watching Dr. Stein work on an antidote. She knew he would not give up until he was done. Finally, the doctor poured a vial onto something...and a shirt appeared on the table! "Eureka!" The doctor shouted. "It works, it works!" Natasha almost cheered, then remembered she was supposed to be hidden. "I'm going to be rich, rich, rich!" The doctor shouted, "Once I patent the formula!" Not if I can help it, Natasha thought to herself. She watched as the doctor left the lab to tell the Monkees. The spy didn't know the formula was only for clothing and not for people. When the coast was clear, she left the secret room and called Boris. "Hello?" Boris said sleepily. "Boris, the doctor has the formula!" Natasha said in a happy whisper. "You are sure?" Boris asked. "Yes, I saw invisible shirt turn visible." "Excellent!" Boris exclaimed, "Go steal the formula!" "I can't, he hasn't written anything down." Natasha replied. "Hmmm. Then we will steal doctor and have him give us the formula." Boris mused. "He won't do it willingly." Natasha warned, "He has plans of being rich." "Ah, these Americans always think of money!" Boris said with disgust, "But it doesn't matter. We have ways of making him cooperate!" "What do you want me to do?" Natasha asked. "Wait for me there. You and I will kidnap doctor and take him to our hideout." "I'll be waiting, darling." Natasha cooed. "Not while we're on duty, Natasha." Boris chided. Upstairs, Dr. Stein knocked on the door and went inside the Monkees' room. "Boys, I've got it!" The Monkees were instantly up, even Micky. "You got the formula?" Micky asked. The doctor pulled Micky's shirt from behind his back. "Here's your shirt, Micky." He smiled. Micky reached for it and saw that his see-through hand was invisible again. "Rats, I'm all invisible again." He said, as he put his shirt on. "Just a little more work, and I'll have the formula to make your skin visible again." The doctor said, "It's morning now. Would you four like some breakfast?" "Sure!" The guys replied and followed the doctor downstairs again. When they got downstairs, they saw Natasha sitting behind her desk. "You're here early, Natasha." Dr. Stein commented. "Ah, yes, Dr. Stein." Natasha said, "There was some paper work I need to catch up on, so I came in early." The doctor shrugged and led the Monkees into the kitchen. As they sat down at the kitchen table, Mike looked at his band mates. "Did you notice something about Natasha?" He asked. "She's beautiful?" Davy replied. "No, she was wearing the same clothes she wore yesterday." Mike said. "Plus, she looked kinda tired, like she hadn't slept last night." The doctor placed cereal on the table and looked at Mike. "Yeah, now that you mention it, Natasha has done that before." He said, "I don't know why. I pay her enough to afford enough clothes." "Because I've been spending my nights spying on you, Dr. Stein!" Natasha's voice said. Everyone turned to see Natasha standing in the doorway of the kitchen. With her was a short man with dark hair and a mustache. Both had guns in their hands. "Natasha, what's the meaning of this?" Dr. Stein demanded. "This means Boris and I are spies for Spotsylvania!" Natasha smirked. "And all those late nights have finally paid off!" "How?" The doctor asked. "We want your invisibility formula and the antidote." Boris said sternly, "Our Fearless Leader can make good use of it." "No, you can't have it! I'm going to be rich!" Dr. Stein shouted. The Monkees looked at the doctor in shock. They thought he was only interested in helping Micky. "You don't have a choice in the matter." Boris said nastily, pointing his gun at the doctor. "If you shoot me, you'll never get the formula." Doctor Stein replied. "He's got you there." Peter replied. "Shut up!" Natasha snapped. While this was going on, Micky was slowly taking his shirt off, so that he would be completely invisible was again. Micky let his shirt slid to the floor and quietly stood up. He walked over to Boris and knocked the gun out of his hand! "What's going on?" Boris said in fright. "It's the invisible one!" Natasha shouted. "He's here!" "Where?" Boris asked. "Right here!" Micky shouted from behind Boris. Boris and Natasha turned and Natasha fired her gun. "You missed!" Micky mocked from another location. Everyone hit the floor as Natasha sprayed the kitchen with bullets. One of the bullets hit a bag of flour, spraying Micky. He was now semi-visible. "Ah, there you are!" Natasha sneered. "Wait, don't shoot!" Dr. Stein yelled. "Give us the formula, or we kill all of them!" Boris shouted, picking up his gun. "Ok, here it is." The doctor said, writing something on a paper towel and handing it to them. "Now leave us alone." "How do we know this is right formula?" Natasha asked. "It is." Dr. Stein lied. "Then you won't mind if we try it out on the invisble one?" Boris asked. "What?" Micky asked. "You're coming with us." Natasha growled. "We will make you visible again. If your friend is lying, you die." Boris grabbed the flour-covered Micky and forced him out of the kitchen. "You won't get away with this!" Davy yelled. Boris and Natasha just laughed as they left the house and shoved Micky into their car. Within seconds, they were gone. "Doc, did you give them the formula?" Mike asked. "No, I didn't." The doc replied, "It doesn't matter anyway. The formula I have is for clothing, not for skin. It wouldn't work on Micky at all." "So Micky is done for." Peter cried. "No he's not." Mike said, "Quick, can you give us some invisbility formula?" "Yes, why?" Dr. Stein asked. "No time to explain, just let me have it." The doc quickly brought Mike a beaker of the formula. Mike ran out to the Monkeemobile and poured it over the car. "What are you doing, Mike?" Davy demanded. "Now, we can follow where they took Micky without them seeing us." Mike replied. He threw the beaker down and the other Monkees climbed into the now invisible car. "I'll call the police and work on the right formula." Dr. Stein promised. The three Monkees waved and took off after the spies. To Be Continued.... Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Marmadas	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#17	[-]
Posts: 418 (07/05/05 10:49 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great job!! Can't think right now tho.... Awesome with the invisible Monkeemobile!! Marmadas Keep spreading the Monkeelove! Check out my Groovy Monkees Website!!!
Mickys411	The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#18	[-]
Posts: 2229 (07/06/05 7:15 PM) Time Girl Fanfic, She Wrote Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Hey guys Just checking on, using my uncle's laptop I love where the story's going Can't wait to see more Mickys411 laura the glick grobanite
Larrysgirl	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#19	[-]
Posts: 1316 (07/07/05 12:45 AM) fanfic girl night owl Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Thanks, Marm and Laura! Glad to see you're safe, Laura! After I wrote that part I realized that driving an invisible car might not be the safest thing to do! Oh well... Even though the outside of the Monkeemobile was invisible, the inside was still ok. Mike was easily able to drive the car around, but he had to be very careful since other cars couldn't see him. More than a few times he had to stop quickly because someone pulled in front of him. "Maybe pouring that formula on the car wasn't such a good idea." Mike remarked, after having to stop suddenly once again. "Yeah, it might ruin the paint job." Peter replied. Anything Mike was going to say was interupted by Davy. "There they go!" He exclaimed, pointing to the left. The car carrying the spies and Micky turned off the main road and onto a smaller side road. Fortunately, there were fewer cars and soon they had the spies' car right in front of them. After a few miles, the spies' car pulled into the driveway of a house. The garage door opened and the car pulled inside. Instantly, the garage door went down. Mike slowly drove past the house and pulled off to the side. "We got their address at least." Mike said, "Let's tell the police." "We can't leave Micky!" Peter exclaimed, "Those evil spies might kill him when they find out the formula doesn't work." "You have a point, shotgun." Mike replied, "So Davy, you find a pay phone and tell the police where to come, while Peter and I sneak around." "Got it, Mike." Davy replied, and started to get out, but then stopped. "Wait, you two might be spotted. "No, I have an idea." Mike smiled. Davy shrugged and got out of the car and ran down the street. Mike put the car into reverse and drove it past the spies house once again. He then drove it into the spies' driveway and quickly shut off the engine. Inside the house, inside a workshop, the spies had put some clothing on Micky so he could be somewhat visible to them. Then, Natasha started to prepare the formula, and Boris tied Micky to a chair. Boris was still doing that when the two spies heard a car in the driveway. "What is that?" Natasha asked, "Did someone follow us?" Boris finished tying a knot and went to look out the front window. There was nobody around. "No, it is all clear." He said, "Get that formula ready." "It will be done soon." She replied, "Then we try it out on him." "For your sake, it better work." Boris told Micky with a laugh. To Be Continued...(by anyone) Lisa, the other Glick Chick! The Glick Chick's Monkees' Lair!
Marmadas	Re: The invisible Monkee (fanfic)	#20	[-]
Posts: 418 (07/07/05 8:22 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great job!! I was sooo stumped, but I have Ideas now!! "Sooo...." Peter questioned, "What's this great idea you have?" Mike fumbled around in the backseat before producing the beaker of invisibility formula. "In order to get inside unseen, we have to use the invisibility formula." "But what if Doc can't find the cure?" Peter asked, "I really don't want to be invisible for the rest of my life!" "It's a chance we're gonna have to take. We want to save Micky's life, don't we? Even if he is invisible, he's still Micky. Now come on, we don't have much time." Davy quietly tiptoed down the street in search of a phonebooth. Being in a residential area, he had to walk a ways to find one. He climbed inside, entered his dime and dialed the number for the police. Nothing happened. He listened closely to the receiver and failed to hear a dial tone. Frusterated, he stepped out of the booth and finally noticed an "Out of Order" sign on the door. Annoyed, he went off in search of another. "Just a little bit more for the top of your head and you're done," an invisible Mike explained, pouring the last bit of the formula on Peter's mop top. "How do I look?" Peter asked. "I'd tell you if I could see you!" Mike joked, then placed the beaker in the glove box. "Now, let's go rescue Micky." After walking a few more blocks, Davy found yet another phone booth. There was an elderly lady inside, so he had to wait. He could catch bits of the conversation, which sounded like a total bore to him. "Now Mildred," the lady instructed, "If he's got the flu, you should never try to get food down him. It always comes up, don't you know..." Davy waited and waited. "...and Harry said the pink boa looked awful on me, so I went with the red one, but now it doesn't match my shoes..." Realizing that the conversation wouldn't end soon, the Englishman headed off in search of yet another phone booth. There you go!! Anyone can take it away! EzCode Parsing Error: color=purple] The world is quiet here. Visit my Corner of Randomness!![/center]