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Great job as always! Yes, YUKU seems to be a little cukoo these days...(or nights, as the case may be).
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1bigbeatlesfan |
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Thank you, Nora!
Lisa, formerly Larrysgirl
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mickys411 |
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Awsome Lisa
Can't wait to see the end
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1bigbeatlesfan |
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You're welcome, dear!
You deserve it!
Here's more... Later that night, a line of thunderstorms passed over Rome, bringing with them heavy rains, wind and thunder. The Monkees were in their beds when Peter got up and screamed, "Ahhhh!" The noise woke the other three Monkees up and they went over to Peter's bed. "What's wrong, Peter?" Davy asked, "It's just thunder." "It's not that." Peter said in a rush, "I just remembered what my sister told me about the Ides of March in Roman history." "Well, what is it so we can go back to sleep." Mike said with a yawn. "Caesar was murdered on that day." Peter said quietly, "After him, Rome started to be ruled by real bad guys like Nero and Caligula." "Maybe Caesar was murdered in a different year." Micky said. "Not this year we're in now." There was a huge thunderclap and Peter jumped into Mike's arms. "Maybe we should tell Caesar." Davy suggested, "We'll say Peter had a dream." "Yeah, I doubt anyone's gonna be sleeping with this going on." Mike said, putting Peter down. The four guys left their room and walked over to the front courtyard. There they saw Caesar standing under a doorway, looking out at the pouring rain. He turned to look at them as they approached. "I see you could not sleep either." Caesar said. "No, it's pretty bad out there tonight." Davy replied. "Neither Heaven or Earth are at peace tonight." Caesar said, looking out at the rain once again, "Three times has Calpurnia called out in her sleep crying, 'Help, they murder Caesar!'" "Then maybe you should stay home tomorrow, Caesar." Mike said carefully. Caesar chuckled and said, "I do not listen to the dreams of women or men. I am descended from the Goddess Venus, and I will make my own destiny." He turned and started to walk back into the house, "Let us all go back to our rooms," Caesar said, "This storm will pass and tomorrow I will continue on with my work." The Monkees followed their host back into the house and went back to their room. They sat on the floor and wondered what to do. "Well, Caesar isn't going to listen to Peter or anyone, that's for sure." Davy said. "Yeah, we'll have to think of another way." Mike said. "I have an idea." Micky said with a smile and told his friend what he planned to do... I think everyone knows where this is going, don't they?
To Be Concluded....(maybe)
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The next morning the skies had cleared and Caesar left his house with a few of his servants. He was on his way to the Forum, to handle the backlog of cases
that had accumulated over the weeks he had been gone. Once that was done, he could make plans to take care of the Parthians.
When Caesar was a few blocks away, he was joined by another man going the same way. "Greetings, Caesar." The man said. "Hello, Casca." Caesar said, not breaking his stride, "Going to the Forum too?" Caesar already knew the answer since Casca was a Senator with many years of experience. The two men had often quarreled over some point of law, but managed to stay civil with each other. "Yes I am." Casca replied, "I have something to show you once we get there." "Another petition?" Caesar asked wearily. "Yes, and I think you'll find this one interesting." Casca replied. "Caesar!" A voice called out to him from the side of the road. "Caesar! Beware the Ides of March!" Caesar and Casca stopped and looked over to where the voice was coming from. Sitting on the side of the road was an old man wrapped in a dirty linen cloth. He pointed a finger at Caesar. "Take care on this day!" The old man croaked, starting to get up. "Why should the great Caesar listen to an old man like you?" Casca said contemtiously. He then pushed the old man down to the ground and continued with Caesar to the Forum. After Caesar and Casca had left, Mike, Peter and Davy came out of hiding and went over to the old man. "Micky, are you okay?" Mike asked. "Yeah, I am." Micky said with a sigh, "I was hoping to stop Caesar, but that other guy stopped me." "I recognized that man." Peter said, "He was talking with Brutus yesterday." "Then we better get over to that Forum." Davy stated. The other three Monkees helped Micky stand up and then they began to run toward the Forum. Micky peeled off his disguise as he ran. As they got closer to the Forum however, there were a great number of people on the streets, making it difficult to make quick progress. Inside the Forum, Caesar called the Senate to order. He was sitting up on a raised dais behind a desk. On the desk was a great stack of scrolls, waiting for his review and signature. "As you can see, learned men of Rome." Caesar said, indicating the scrolls, "There is a lot of work to be done today. After this, I will begin making plans to attend to the Parthians who have been causing trouble on our Eastern borders." "You just got back!" A senator shouted from his bench. "Rome needs you here!" "And you are out of order, Cassius." Caesar said coldly, "I will go where I feel it is neccessary for me to go. The generals who are out there now do not seem able to handle the situation, so I will make sure the Parthians stay on their own land for good." Casca stood up. "Caesar, may I give you something?" He asked. Caesar beckoned with his hand. Casca looked over at the senate and then walked over to Caesar's dais. The Monkees then came into the Forum. They were directed into the public viewing area just behind the curved Senate benches. "There's Caesar." Peter said quickly. "Shhh!" Several other spectators told him. Casca walked over to the dais and stood at the bottom of the Dais. "I have something for you." Casca said. He reached into his toga...and pulled out a scroll. The Monkees breathed a sigh of relief. Casca handed the scroll to a man named Cimber, who was standing next to Caesar "What is this petition for, Casca?" Caesar asked, taking the scroll from Cimber. "It is a petition asking you to give up your dictator status, Caesar." Casca replied, "And let us elect who is to be Proconsol again." Caesar didn't answer Casca, but simply unrolled the scroll and began to read it. Cimber and Casca exchanged looks, and Cimber grabbed Caesar's toga and pulled it down, ripping it. "What are you doing, Cimber?" Caesar demanded. Just then, Casca pulled a knife out of his toga and slashed at Caesar's neck. But Caesar was too quick and he grabbed Casca's arm. "What are you doing, Villain?" Caesar snarled. As this was going on, several other senators, including Brutus, were running toward the Dais. The Monkees could see that they all had knives in their hands. "Caesar, watch out!" The Monkees shouted. But it was too late. Brutus and the other men with him attacked Caesar. The table was knocked over, sending the scrolls flying. Caesar tried to get away, but he tripped and fell, and his assassins fell upon him. The senators not involved in the plot and the the spectators screamed and ran out of the Forum as fast as they could. The Monkees jumped over the low wall separating the spectator area and tried to get over to Caesar, but were blocked by several knife-wielding men. As fast as the assassination started it was over. Caesar lay on the Forum floor in a pool of his own blood, his toga covering his head. Brutus looked shocked as he spoke to Casca. "What have we done?" He demanded. "We've saved the Republic, that's what!" Casca said with a smile. But Casca seemed to be the only one with that opinion. The senators then fled the Forum, leaving the shocked and sickened Monkees alone with Caesar's body. To Be Concluded...(promise)
Lisa, formerly Larrysgirl
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Okay...here it is. The end. A big thanks to Laura and Sally for their help!
Lisa, formerly Larrysgirl
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NoraLou |
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Great job!
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mickys411 |
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Awsome job Lisa
That was a very surprising ending
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1bigbeatlesfan |
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Thank you, Nora and Laura!
Laura, I got the first part of your story! I'll put up both versions on my website!
Lisa, formerly Larrysgirl
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LittleMetalBottletops |
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Nicely done, ladies! For a while there I was wondering whether The Monkees were going to go against the "prime directive" (if you're a Star
Trek fan you'll know what I mean
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I am waiting anxiously for your next story, Lisa and Laura. Sally B.
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Nice one, ladies!
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1bigbeatlesfan |
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Thank you everyone for the kind words!
Right now, I'm working on putting Laura's solo stories up at my web site. Since they're real-life Micky stories, they can't be posted here so I'll give a shout-out when they're ready! Sally, I think Laura's got another story coming soon and then I'll do mine. It's gonna be a Mike story, and that's all I'll say!
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