I love this story, Nora. Post more soon!
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I read this chapter and Sunny Girlfriend come on my iPod. I love how Mike is caring friend. I love his rational voice.
I love this story, Nora. Post more soon!
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Thanks everyone for the kind words. Contrary to popular belief, I have not moved to Siberia nor thrown this story into the lake. If all goes well it will be
updated tomorrow night-and I apologize for the long break!
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Here we go:
"Well son, nothing appears to be broken or fractured," smiled Dr. Richards. He offered Micky his hand to use as a lever so he could sit up on the x-ray table, then called Davy, who rushed into the room. "Good news. It's a bad sprain, but it's only a sprain. Walking on it like he did probably made it worse. So I want you to keep off of it for a few days-and I mean off. The crutches are only for when you really need to get off the couch." "In other words, we have to wait on him hand and foot?" Davy winked cheekily. The doctor laughed, "Well, it's either do that for a few days or do it for a few weeks if he gets worse." "Davy Jones at your service, Micky," chuckled the Englishman. "Keep that ankle elevated and wrapped," instructed Dr. Richards. "And iced on and off for the next 24 hours. Then I'll want to see you back on Tuesday. Got all that?" "Yes, doc," Micky replied. "And one more thing." "What's that?" the drummer was curious. "Do whatever it takes to get Maggie back. The world just isn't right when you two are apart. Tell her doctor's orders if you have to." Micky gave him a faint smile. "We'll make sure he stays put," Davy assured the physician. He handed the crutches to Micky and after saying their thanks to the doctor, got ready to go home. Micky was pretty wiped out by the time they reached the pad. Somehow he had managed to negotiate the crutches while climbing the stairs-no easy task. Gladly, he gave the crutches to Davy and flopped on the sofa. "Need anything?" Davy asked. Micky had already closed his eyes. Wearily, he shook his head "no" and was soon asleep. Davy shrugged, wondering where Peter and Mike were. When Peter got home right before lunch, Micky was still conked out. The blonde Monkee set two sacks of groceries down on the kitchen counter. Davy took a break from fixing lunch to peek inside the bags, boyishly hoping for a treat. He was surprised to see...not much. "Did you leave some outside?" Peter sadly wagged his head, "This was all we could afford. I even had to put a few things back. Looks like it's going to be tight for a while. Hope you like beans and rice." "Well, we should have another booking coming up pretty soon. Let's check the calander," Davy said hopefully. He went to check the datebook on the desk, only to discover the one booking they had in the next two weeks had a line through it and Mike's handwritten "cancelled" underneath. "I guess we'll be searching the want ads again," sighed Davy. Peter looked unusually gloomy, "Yeah, if we can scrape up enough money to buy a paper." "Why don't we try and wake Micky up?" suggested Davy as he set the table for lunch. He'd prepared quite a spread of sandwhiches, soup, chips and carrot and celery sticks, which he now regretted. "Since this will be our 'last supper'". More next week! ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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dydrmblvr |
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Things are looking pretty bleak at the pad. Poor guys!! I wonder what Mags is up too?
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I just realized I never commented on your previous installment, Nora, but you have been and are continuing to do a great job with this story, and it's
always a pleasure to read more of it!
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This is very short but I thought you all might want to see the direction this story is taking:
After lunch the guys set up the checkerboard and held a tournament. Partly it was to keep Micky occupied and partly to keep their minds off their financial woes. It wasn't too long before Mike walked in, a smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "What's the matter, Mike?" asked Davy. "Yeah, you look almost cheerful, maybe even chipper," Micky smirked. "What would you guys say if I told you I have a plan to a) make some good money b), convince Maggie to get back together with Micky and c) have the chance to make Alan look like the scoundrel he is in the process?" asked Mike trying, but not succeeding, to grin too broadly. "I'd say you're out of your bird," declared Davy, giving him a curious stare. "I'd say I think we've had enough schemes lately," sighed Peter. Only Micky looked enthusiastic, "I say lets hear it!" "Thank you, Mick," nodded Mike, before sticking his tongue out at the other two. "Anyway, I took Maggie out for lunch today, to make sure she was okay and that she ate something after last night." Micky tried to convey an appreciative look. He was glad his friends were still looking out for Maggie even when he couldn't. Mike continued, "Now, here's the good news: Maggie will not directly say she cares for Alan, and after last night we all know she still loves Micky." "That's good, but how will that help us pay the rent?" asked the practical Davy. He wondered if Mike realized just how bad off they were. "Because," began Mike importantly. "I also got us jobs. On the way home I passed by a bulletin board. The Country Club was hiring. We start on Tuesday. Your foot should be better by then, Micky." "So we got a gig there?" Peter asked hopefully. For the first time Mike faltered, "Not-not exactly. "So...what will we be doing there?" wondered Micky, his enthusiasm beginning to fade. "They need a waiter, a caddy, an assistant chef and someone to check coats and hats. I guess we'll draw straws to see who gets what job. But don't you see? We'll be there when Maggie and Alan are there on Saturday night." Slow smiles spread across the others' faces as they realized the genius of Mike's plan. Soon they were discussing strategy and disguises. More soon! ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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dydrmblvr |
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Bravo!! That's 'my' Mikie!!
Is there such
a thing????
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Mare55 |
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This is getting really good!!!
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I've been working on this and will try to have a chapter up by Sun. night. The guys will get a little visit from Micky's mom and sister.
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Sorry for the delay on this story. Now that the anniversary party is over (and I'm recovered!) hopefully I'll be able to work on it more.
Sunday afternoons were usually pretty uneventful for the guys. Generally they just relaxed, sometimes hitting the beach of the movie theatre for a matinee. Today though, it was too cold for the beach, and they were too broke to do much else. They didn't even have the prospect of a nice Sunday dinner to look forward to, so it was a rather bleak scene at the pad. Mike and Davy were half-heartedly playing cards and Peter was going through a cookbook titled "101 Uses for Cream of Mushroom Soup". Micky took up the couch and went between chafing at the fact he couldn't do much, studying and dozing. A ringing telephone broke the relative quietness of the room and Mike went to answer it. "Hello? Oh, hi Patti," he didn't hide his disdain for her. Micky was now wide awake, wildly shaking his head and gesturing that he didn't want to talk to her. Mike wasn't so sympathetic to his plight, thinking Micky had gotten himself into this mess and he could get himself out. Fortunately for Micky the phone cord was too short to reach the sofa. Mike rolled his eyes at that luck and turned to speak into the mouthpiece, "He can't come to the phone, Patti. Well, because he sprained his ankle. Yeah, it's really bad. No, he can't take you shopping or to a movie...well because he can't walk..." Mike was getting visibly exaspirated. "Hang on, let me see if Micky has anything to tell you." "Don't bother calling here again!" said Micky, loud enough for Patti to hear on the other end. Mike could clear the click of the receiver and was pleasantly surprised at Micky's firmness. "Well, at least now Patti's out of the picture," Davy commented. "And I'm really sorry for even suggesting the idea." "It's alright," Micky shrugged, still looking depressed. "All we have to do now is get Maggie back in the picture," added Peter. Micky felt a little better after that but it didn't lift his mood much. He couldn't believe how incredibly empty he felt inside, and a sigh he didn't mean for anyone to hear escaped him. Peter heard it though, and came over to pat Micky's shoulder, "Things will get better. It'll be tight this next week but once we get that paycheck and-" He was interrupted by a knock on the door. "Guess this isn't going to be such a dull day after all," Mike commented as he went to answer it. He was delighted, and somewhat relieved, to see Janelle and Coco standing there. "Hello, Michael," she greeted him with a warm hug. Coco would have also but her hands were full. In one arm was a large cooking pot and in the other a grocery sack. Micky sat up a little straighter, "Mom, Coco, what are you doing here?" "Well, I haven't heard from you in three weeks and it's when you don't call or write that I know something's wrong. And by the looks of things around here, a lot must be wrong. I've never seen you boys with such long faces." Micky's cheeks flushed pink with shame. He hadn't had the heart to tell his family about Maggie since they adored her so. And he never wanted to burden his mom with their financial problems. "You could say that," he said quietly. The other three guys glanced at each other. They wanted to let Micky and his mom talk in private, and since Micky couldn't leave, it meant they would have to. Janelle sensed this, "Coco, why don't you unload those groceries? Like I said boys, I knew things were bad. It's just some milk and cheese and pasta and hot dogs and such to tide you over. That's a pot of chicken stew and should last you a couple meals. It's great with rolls-oh drat, I forgot the rolls! Coco, would you please take the boys and get a package of rolls? And maybe a pie or cake for them too at the bakery? Whatever they want." "Well take you out to a real nice supper soon, Janelle," offered Davy, kissing her on the cheek. "Well come on, let's get our coats. We'll take our time." Finally, everything was situated and the house was quiet. But now that he was free to talk, Micky felt tongue-tied and not sure where to begin. Janelle came to sit down beside him, "There's nothing you can't tell me, baby." Leaning his head on his mother's shoulder, Micky recounted everything that had happened. Janelle was a sympathetic listener and would rub her son's back when his voice threatened to break or when he swiped at his eyes. Her mother-heart ached for him and she wished she could do something to ease his burden. In a way she felt as helpless as she did when Micky struggled with a bone disease as a lad. Then she could only watch, wait, worry and pray between attempts to cheer him. "Oh honey, I'm so sorry," she whispered, kissing the top of his head when he was done. "But why didn't you let me know?" Micky straightened up but kept his eyes on the floor, "I didn't want you to know how much I messed things up with Maggie. And I didn't want you to be angry with her, either, you think so much of her." "I love Maggie like I do my own," Janelle replied softly as she cupped his chin in her hand so they could meet eye-to-eye. "But you're my son. Nothing you could do would ever make me ashamed of you." "Thanks, Mom," he smiled weakly. Meanwhile, on their trip to the bakery the guys filled Coco in about her brother. On their return, Coco told them she wanted to stop by Maggie's for a few minutes before going back to the pad. "You're not gonna hit her or anything are you?" asked Mike bluntly. "No," Coco laughed, her tone a bit defensive. "I'm taking psychology this semester. I want to use reverse psychology on her." "What's that?" Davy asked. "Well why don't you come with me and find out?" she offered saucily. "Don't mind if I do," he replied and followed her to Maggie's while and Mike brought home the rolls and the pie. Stay tuned for more! ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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I can't wait to hear more!
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I was missing Micky and Maggie and so glad to see the story update. Thank you, Nora! Looking forward to next update
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Your wish is my command, Mare and Li!
Coco knocked on Maggie's door. "Just you watch," she said, turning to Davy. Maggie answered, and like Micky, her face flushed with shame.
She adored Micky's family and wasn't sure how they had received the news of the break up. Coco gave her no reason to worry though.
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dydrmblvr |
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Awesome chapter, Nora!!
It's really going to make it interesting to see what happens at the country club now!
Nora!!!
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Mare55 |
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Just loving it!!!
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Li Sung |
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I was not disappointed. Always a gem to read, Nora. Easy to visualize. Keep more coming
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What a fun chapter!
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danzin01 |
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Great job, can't wait for more!!!!!
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NoraLou |
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This will end eventually, I promise...
Edit: Yuku must be cukoo again. I'm quite sure it's not 2:10 pm even on Monkeeland time! ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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And the year is 2003. Wow, it made us 5 years younger!
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NoraLou |
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I like that idea!
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DavidForever wrote: We don't really know what '03 it is -- it could even be 2103, 2203 ... 3003 -- or possibly even 1903 or before!
Last Edited By: LittleMetalBottletops
05/12/08 8:23 AM.
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